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Crayola Sunset |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Crayola Sunset ~*Marge Tindal*~ Melting magenta brushes lavender-laced edges of alabaster puffs heading home Westward across lazuline skies in crimson-crinolined cumulus  Hush of blushfalls into the night sprinkling sparkling cerulean starlight softly upon the pillow of satin indigo in velveted softness against a backdrop of welkin evening In amaze of haze she-moon appears draping beams of radiance in silver splendor across gentle shoulders basking lovers in adornment Passionate purple kisses melt into dawn ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
"In amaze of haze she-moon appears" my favorite line, oh *sigh*, loved your picture. I sit here and wonder what would you do with oil pastels? Just perfect Marge! ~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 03-23-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Thank you so much. I do work in pastels ... how did you know ? Couldn't help this one - it appeared across the lake at sunset. I'm really glad you enjoyed it as much as I did.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Marvelous! You know, my tongue was twisting a bit with this...lol! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...but the colors, oh, the colors.... |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I wanna see a Florida sunset...  ... I think I will... I like this, Marge...  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You color your sunset words so beautifully...that I think your poem prettier than the sky. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hush of blush falls into the night sprinkling sparkling cerulean starlight softly upon the pillow of satin indigo in velveted softness against a backdrop of welkin evening In amaze of haze she-moon appears draping beams of radiance in silver splendor across gentle shoulders ==================================== my goodness...this imagery overload done to perfection... very lovely Margie... wonderful poetic painting with imagery and poetic phrases. ya lit up the forums with this gem oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Awww what beauiful visions Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ Ahhhh ... as was my heart in viewing it. Thank you. Karilea~ And it was just as it appeared - so lovely ... and I thank you for enjoying it. Nan~ And ... I'd LOVE to share one with you.  Martie~ You know I tried to capture it as it fell ... I hope I did ... *Hugs* JanetMarie~ I wish I could share the splendorous colors exactly as He paints them for us. Thank you, sweet lady. MoonDust~ Thank you for enjoying it with me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very visually stimulating, I love it "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
*hush of blush* EXCELLENT!!!!! Marge, this is wonderful. "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! Marge, this is extremely well penned and phrased, the imagery and symbolism is phenomenal! Very clever, indeed, you blow me away with your talent and exuberance for the wonders of life. Perfect presentation! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LakeWalker~ Thank you VERY much ! JustAWoman~ I just love to share - Thank you for letting me share with you. Melissa~ Can I gather that you like it ? You're a doll ... God did the 'perfect' ... and granted me the words for the 'presentation'. I am ever-grateful. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
a beautiful picture you have painted here, Marge. I enjoyed this. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Thank you so very much for enjoying this one with me. *Hugs*, my friend ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Passionate purple kisses melt into dawn" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Marge~ I love this....you are so amazing SEA |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ahh, Marge. I keep wondering why it is that I haven't read your work lately. Sorry. You know I enjoy it when I read it. I do read more often than comment though. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah! Marge, ever so fascinating to read what you write and splendrously coloured too... Brilliant... and I do love sunsets... as beautiful as these... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Now why would I just know you'd rush right to those kisses ? LOL ! Thanks, sweetie ! Temptress~ Thanks for the reply. Sudhir~ Thanks for letting me share the beauty of this sunset with you. Appreciate knowing you enjoyed it. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
melting magneta? yep... melting heart here.. and welkin sky to boot... woo hooo beautiful poetry Marge... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*Mike*~ Okay, now I am certainly a smiling little happy moonbeam camper and I thank you for the welkin glow in the sky tonight, my friend ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Admit it. You bought the 180 box set, right. I'm taking myself to the Dakota art store, first thing tomorrow. I see no reason why I should struggle with this 80 box set any longer than absolutely necessary. My way of saying: WOW! "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julian~  LOL ! Actually, I got the Super Muse Box ! Just filled with active inspirational imagination !  Thanks for the grin ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beauty you've shared with us... I love sunsets and you've painted one much needed on this rainy day. *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- nobody writes in color quite like you... you know how much i love your colorful creations...wonderful... love you, vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
oops... [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 04-01-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful painting of sunset and the title is priceless! Curious, are you perhaps in a part of Florida that is blessed with a sunrise and a sunset over the water? My first visit to the east coast, I've always lived on the west coast, provided me with the opportunity to see an ocean view of each. It was a delight for me. It's great to know you do pastels, that is surely why you see and write such vivid images. Well done, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ May your sun set in glorious hues. Love ya'. ~*VanDana~ You're a doll ! ~*Vicky~ Yeahhhhh ! Just get back here more often to enjoy them. I miss YOU and your poetry !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
It seems I've made an enemy yet 'twas never my intention to state a tiny opinion seems to have mired your attention. It is unfortunate that this seems to have occurred for nothing I might say can help for naught of it is heard. Would it be best I bid adieu to leave this place of sharing that no one will think more of me no longer them despairing? |
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