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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-03-31 06:24 PM

Peace

I walk among the evergreens
And into woods’ retreat
The wondrous sounds of season’s voice
Gives lightness to my feet

In rhapsody of meadow lark
From navigating geese
The sounds of nature beckoning
To cradle me in peace

I listen there in silent awe
Among the fern and brush
To ease my heart and weary mind
In songs of morning thrush

Whenever I am all alone
Among the rustling trees
Birds sing their lovely arias
That float the subtle breeze

This interlude of solitude
In music undefined
Resonates the heartstrings
And brings solace to the mind

Songbirds of the woods and field
Know well my hour of grief
As sprightly tunes come echoing
From every blade and leaf

When swallow’s hymns have touched my heart
My daily burdens cease
In lilting notes of warbling tunes
I find an inner peace

Elizabeth Santos

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-03-31 07:07 PM

Elizabeth~
Very, very pretty writing ...

'This interlude of solitude
In music undefined
Resonates the heartstrings
And brings solace to the mind'

Peace in the making ...
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

2 posted 2001-03-31 07:16 PM

Liz, this is just gorgeous. How peaceful, these birdsongs and how beautiful your poem. Helmut would love this. I'll send it to him, if that's alright with you. (o:

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2001-03-31 07:26 PM

Marge,
THank you, dear. I knew you would enjoy this poem

Claire. You words are much appreciated. Please do send it to Helmut. THanks for your comments

Liz

tradewind
Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 101

4 posted 2001-03-31 07:47 PM

very soothing, you've captured the feeling of peace very well in this poem and written it beautifully!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2001-03-31 10:39 PM

I could feel the peace in this Elizabeth. Very beautifully done!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-04-01 01:48 PM

I feel better now Liz. . . thank you. . .

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2001-04-01 04:04 PM

This is beautiful, Elizabeth... I'm glad you found your place of peace... and glad you shared it with us all. *S*

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

8 posted 2001-04-01 04:39 PM

Reading your work is meditation itself. Awe.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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