Slipping Into Your Dreams (Challenge - Thank you, Sven)

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Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

0 posted 2001-04-03 09:20 AM

Slipping into your dreams
I explore you with
the pure desire of
touching deeper than
your quick smile and
random thoughts of day

And so I gracefully slip within the pool of
your flowing dreams
Immerged completely within
the depths of you
Washing over me
as I dive deeper
Exploring the hidden treasures
of you

And from there,
Deep within
I look up to see the light
beautiful and true
shining down on you

Yes....I know you now.

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

1 posted 2001-04-03 09:50 AM

Whew, I cannot pick just one line from this one...I love it. You can make a guy weak here. *S*

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-04-03 11:28 AM

If we only could. Enjoyed muchly. (I know it's not a word, I just felt like saying it.) We are in mutual admiration of one anothers work. Thank you.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2001-04-03 12:53 PM

slipping into your dreams, this was awesome, I loved the illusion of this, slipping into someones dreams, how better to know them.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-03 01:02 PM

You're welcome for the line. . . and thank you for a wonderful poem. . .

To slip into someone's dreams. . . wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

5 posted 2001-04-03 01:03 PM

Total domination of image and poetic curve.
Outstanding.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

6 posted 2001-04-03 01:46 PM

Thank you PK! Men baffle me, and so I shall take your word for it.

JLR, and just think of the wicked secrets we'd learn!

LOL Thank you!

Thank you so much, Rosebud!

You're very kind.

Sven, you are always so sweet. Thank you, my friend!

Julian, THANK YOU! You just made my day.

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Panne447
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 196
S.A. TX

7 posted 2001-04-03 02:18 PM

JAW, Nicely done. Glad I came in to while away my afternoon. Panne
P.S. Where do you guys post and get the challenges?

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

8 posted 2001-04-03 02:30 PM

You met this challenge superbly. Very nice!

Mike

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

9 posted 2001-04-03 03:00 PM

Thank you Panne! If you go click on discussion at the top, scroll down to the Challenge section, or take a peek in the lounge or Alley.

Thanks, Peanut!

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-08-11 11:42 AM

some days. . . I just like to come back here. . . and re-read. . .

*sigh*

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

11 posted 2001-08-11 02:21 PM

I'm glad you did, Sven and that I noticed. I never 'sigh' but, ok, just this once.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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12 posted 2004-04-21 04:11 AM

awesome!

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