Open Poetry #13 |
Moon-Over Journey |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Moon-Over Journey ~*Marge Tindal*~ When one leaves the earthly shell making the longest journey of all time Rising in spirit above the clouds of obscurity journeying over the moon to ancient homecoming All loved ones left below can be at peace in knowing the spirit of the soul has gone as far as it needs go Waiting spirits of welcome - set the peace dove free returning a message of soul-safe passage to loved ones The walk is over - the Moon-Over Journey is complete *For Mysteria, in loving memory of Missy~ Stirring Native music "The Prophecy Song" from SheWhoWavs ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How nice of you to write this for Mysteria and Missy. Joyce |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
pretty cool pretty cool |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ya did good Miss Marge...indeed. (As usual) jwesley |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
wonderful write. i enjoyed it. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very beautiful, I just posted something with the same theme (The candle). Enjoyed! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
As always Marge, just beautiful. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I thought this was beautiful Marge, as I could relate to it so very well....Sue Suetang |
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Tessa Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67Ohio |
This is beautiful and so comforting.....I think I shall hold onto this. The peacefulness in it is very calming. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beauty writing for a beautiful cause...bravo, Marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ Thank you. That's what friends are for. Walt~ Thank you. JWesley~ It pleases me to know you think so. Thanks. DawnEclipse~ Thank you for letting me know. Walker~ I enjoyed yours as well. As I said, there are spirits walking ~ GentleSpirit~ I appreciate your thoughts. SueTang~ I am pleased you found it beautiful. I hope that it gave you some comfort also. Tessa~ I am pleased you found it comforting. Thank you for letting me know. Balladeer~ Thank you, sweet friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
beautiful indeed marge the thoughts and music unite blessings warrior |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoaringEagle~ My friend, you know I thank you for the blessings. Much love to you~ ~*Maiden*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
This was lovely from one friend to another. Shades of Montana reservations and our lodges. excellent. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~*Front Page of Program*~ (My Miss) Marge I can not even begin to tell you how much your kind acknowledgement of my Goddaughter's life and death means to me. I will print this and give it to her Mother, as I am sure she will treasure it as much as I do. As you know, we were all day yesterday "doing our work" but now our work is over. The hankerchief of tears was shared with our brothers and sisters as we gathered to pray for Missy on her "walk of fire" so she would know she was not alone. I feel the keepers of the gate opened them wide to this loving, caring, and sweet young woman and a chorus of Osiyo Oginalii, Ulihelisdi Owenvsv resounded, to welcome her home. I have put up the last picture taken of Missy to remind everyone how precious life is as it is truly a gift. ~Not a good couple of years~ For those who do not know, my Goddaughter committed suicide on Easter, and she is now on a safe journey, in the hands of ancients who will protect her from any more harm. My godson in the United States also commited suicide in February of 2000. Now my obligations during these two young people's living years are done, but now my work begins to celebrate Missy's life along with Todd's, and hold dear her memory as I do Todd's. Again Marge, thank you my sister! You are such a kind and loving soul, and your empathy was heartfelt as you reached out to me and shared "the hankerchief of tears", I shall not forget this. I now await the gentle flutter of the peace dove's wings and all will be well. Sharon x o Suetang: There is much peace in the ways of the ancients, and continue to speak words of your heavy heart, and the peace dove will come. Hugs Please visit me at my new homepage: http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673 [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 04-25-2001).] |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
mysteria ,may I gently fold my arms about you and whisper that someone in a far off hemisphere cares ...God's richest blessings to you as you all heal in such sorrowful times . |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Marge, you are indeed a loving soul and this poem was so comforting to me as well. The song is one I will treasure. I don't think I've ever heard a more haunting tune, but comforting at the same time. I thought of my own beloved grandmother who was Native American and the song brought her closer to me somehow.. I thank you for this beautiful poem so filled with love. Love and Light always, Kate Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julian~ Thank you for letting me know it touched you. Mysteria~ My friend, she is lovely ... thank you for sharing Missy's photo with us. Hugging you with words - but know that I hold you close in a hug from my heart. Sleep, my friend - the peace dove has come. Helen~ Thank you for sending our friend a hug. Katherine~ How the light from another's candle can touch our lives~ Thank you for your kind thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I know that this poem touched the core of Sharon's heart and it speaks to me as well with comfort and blessed understanding that the beyond may be the best journey. Hugs! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very nice, poem Marge..... I like this. Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~SisterOfMyHeart~ It is a journey we all will someday make and I'm just sure it will be as wonderful as we've been promised. *Hugs* Nate, my friend~ Thank you for letting me know. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Not only do I thank Marge for being the kind of friend that enters your heart and heals but I wish to thank each of you that left such loving comments on this wonderful piece Marge has done. I am finally at peace and my work is finished in seeing my Miss on her journey. The peace dove has came, and all is well. Thank you all for your kindness. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can't hear the music... but the poem is so very moving. What a beautiful gift to help a friend find peace through her grief. Margie gal, in case we don't say so often enough, the love you give us all so generously is so very much appreciated. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ You and Missy's family are held in the circle of our friendship. Thank you for being here. SuthernGal~ That is such a nice thing for you to say. I feel so blessed with the friendship of so many. *Hugs* I do wish you could hear this musical piece~ It is just soooooooo lovely. Let me know if I can send it somewhere that you could hear it. I will ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Very moving and a wonderful tribute of honor to her memory. I loved the music --and set the mood of quiet waters and senerity. The more people that read your tribute... they will not be forgotten. Their memories will live on. In rememberance, LP Make a memory by touching someone you love ~ for time stands not still. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LatinPassion~ Thank you so much for reading and finding the message in my comforting render for a friend. Welcome to the hearth of friendship in this Passions circle. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It was worth a trip to the library just to hear the music... thanks for letting me know it's importance to an already beautiful presentation. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Thank YOU for taking the time and wanting to hear this lovely music. I love ya', gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I somehow needed to read and hear this again, it soothes my soul. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ And I am blessed that it does so. It also eases my soul on this night. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ I have never come across people as wonderful or so precious as i have here...your heart shows with each painting you share with us.... Mysteria~ I am so sorry for your loss....I havent been around much lately, but wanted you to know I will keep you in prayers for better tomorrows....peace and hugs... Marge..hugs to you.... Greeneyes~
"Within you I lose myself |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Back again Marge! Thank you Greeneyes, could no agree with you more. This is a site of poeple who connect with one another in a mature, loving and sincere way, and just so happen to write poetry as well. We are truly blessed. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 05-01-2001).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, this is a beautiful uplifting of spirit. And a wonderful gift. Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Thank you ... that is a very nice compliment to us all. *Hugs* Mysteria~ *HUGS* Corinne~ Thank you soooooo much for letting me know you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- this is so absolutely beautiful, and the music...i just love it. this was such a sweet and loving gesture from you, and I believe it appropriate that this one should rise again.. thanks so much for sharing this with me love and hugs, ~vicky Mysteria- great big hugs to you, my sweet friend. love ya, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ When spirits walk ~ they do so in great numbers~ There is a gentle stirring that reverberates across time~ Reaching out ... touching~ Gathering sparks from the fires of caring hearts~ What was ... is and will be again. Such comforting thoughts sent to guide us~ Vesseled in the keepers~ Shared in the pouring~ Thank you, gentle friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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