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Daybreak Uncertainties
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Daybreak Uncertainties |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 as I sit on the beach at dawn, the brilliant hues having caught my eye, I see only your face in this majesty... hardly a few short hours ago, I was lying in your arms, absorbing the stillness of complete bliss... as I lie back on the subdued sand, the refreshing ocean spray having taken over my senses, I only remember your touch in the night... just yesterday, I was staring into your eyes, tasting the sweetness of your kiss... as I stare at the heavens above, the animated clouds having captured my attention, I think of the shadow of doubt in my mind... not all that long ago, we were face to face, enjoying the exclusiveness of one another... as I close my eyes to the world, this question having taken over my mind, I can only wonder... precisely like yesterday, was my love enough to keep you, wanting me, no matter who walks into your life? as I notice the scent of the ocean, the sweet salt water having made its way into my heart, I remember your whispered words... as I have today, I long to have you here with me permanently, providing you with the ecstasy your spirit has required... -kh 04/02/01 to be with you... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This asked so many questions... was my love enough to keep you, wanting me, no matter who walks into your life? ...that I have asked myself. It is rare that I read something that I can so perfectly relate to as I did every word of this. And you wrote it with perfection! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
snowpants, your memories are so clear. And you paint a very pretty picture. If it is right, you will get more than memories. Hugs ME |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I agree with JLR, this was perfect. The picture is breathtaking!! Thank you for sharing, sp.  All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thank you for the picture AND the poem! Kathleen Blake |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
JLR: thank you, m'friend, for your thoughtful compliment...perfection?  I truly appreciate your words!ME: yes, very VERY clear...thank you so much, and I truly do think I'll be getting much more than memories indeed...including the chance to make many more! I am glad you liked this! LW: why thank you, my friend...your words flatter me! and it is always my pleasure to share! Kathleen: thank you as always! I am glad you could stop by!! sp  to be with you... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful words enhanced by an incredible picture... I like this very much, snowpants!! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Thanks for sharing beautiful words and picture of such nice feeling! [This message has been edited by walker (edited 04-04-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I see only your face in this majesty... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My thoughts about your work, too. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
suthern: thank you...I appreciate your kind reply! walker: and thank you for reading, m'friend...glad you liked it! interloper: why thank you so very much...your words are a great encouragement! glad you could stop by! sp to be with you... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sp. . . this reminds me of Whitman. . . "On the beach at night alone" wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thanks, Sven...glad you liked this! sp to be with you... |
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