Open Poetry #13 |
If Only For A Moment (A thank you to Joe, the only man who never requested my heart) |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thank you... 11am call Seriousness eminating from your voice Concern I'm sorry I worried you But I needed you and you offered to call. You've been there in it all Quietly taking the back seat While I persued what I thought would bring me love For a longer term In all the nights, my friend, You patiently there. On the other end offering hugs For something I couldn't tell you about. No questions You just hoped I was okay. So I thank you. You've been there for so long now And I've always treasured your friendship The friendship that I must turn to now And thank you For listening So today I'm hanging on to that 11am call And finally Being able to fall asleep. We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you.. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Wonderful, Jennifer. I found your title the clincher of it all.
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thank you..and thank you for calling me Jennifer.. We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See? There ARE good guys in white hats.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's great to have a friend like that........cherish him! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It sounds like you have something very special there, and that you cherish it...this was beautiful. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's always good to have friends. . . excellent writing Jennifer. . . as has all of your writing been lately. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
a very nice tribute to your friend...well done |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful tribute to a true friend... |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yes..Thank you all. He is a wonderful friend. I have many wonderful friends though, and I wish I could write the same for all of them. One day, right? Love and hugs to you all for your responses. We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you.. |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
It is so nice to have a friend like that. Red |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cool story nice write o yuh |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem...James |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Me and JFK - only thing in common - we wear no hats (I guess he wore one for inaugeration) - but hat - white or black - male or female - like everything else - one must look beneath the surface -how's that phrase go? "A good man is had to find..." or is it "A hard man is good to find..."? It IS nice when 'you've got a friend' - well said Ms T |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
hehehehe cute Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is a great piece. Awesome tribute by a great poetess |
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