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Enotneicna
Member

since 1999-06-06

Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 2001-04-02 12:36 PM

Solid rock pools
Encompassed by rocks covered
with thick volumes of soft moss
Stairstep through trees
laden with heavy hanging moss and lichen
Shrubs, ferns and flowers
flourish in the steaming mist that cloaks
Reminiscent of Dragon’s Breath

The water that fills these pools
flows forth from lakes
Deep within the caverns of the earth
Where the Dragons sought refuge long ago.

The Dragons swim the lakes
heated by the molten core of the world.
Opaline scales of many hues litter the lake bottom
Along with gems and gold
which coalesce with minerals and ores
seeping into the water
from the subterranean scape.

This water will refresh the soul
Revive the spirit
Releave fatigue
And rejuvinate the body.
SLR
4-2-01

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

[This message has been edited by Enotneicna (edited 04-02-2001).]

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2001-04-02 04:23 PM

A very nice fantasy....

"Or, like the thief of fire from heaven,
Wilt thou withstand the shock?
And share with him - the unforgiven-
His vulture and his rock?"
"lord byro

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-02 05:44 PM

I love the scene you have described with the dragons in the water. Nice writing!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Enotneicna
Member

since 1999-06-06

Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

3 posted 2001-04-02 08:02 PM

Jamie,
Yes, it is indeed!

Many blessings
always
Eno

Lone Wolf,
Thank you muchly.

Many blessings
always
Eno

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-04-03 12:51 PM

Enotneicna~
You portray these tales so lovingly.
It is always such a pleasure to find your gems sprinkled here.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-04-04 05:48 PM

I almost missed this gem, settled to the bottom coalescing with the others.

Is the water really that good?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-04-04 07:02 PM

Excellent imagery, well penned!~

Take care,
Melissa~

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

7 posted 2001-04-04 07:06 PM

I agree very well written. I love fantasy pieces.

Enotneicna
Member

since 1999-06-06

Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

8 posted 2001-04-23 04:27 PM

Marge......I'm just a storyteller at heart. specially Dragon-tales.

It's always wonderful to find your replies to my tales, my friend.:

Much love and many blessings
Always,
Eno

Interloper......I'm glad you didn't miss it! And YES......the water is that good!!!

many blessings
Always,
Eno

Honeybee.......thanks....glad you enjoyed!
many blessings to you.

Always,
Eno

Brad Majors.......I'm not sure how much fantasy.....lol......I feel as if I have a dragon looking over my shoulder putting images into my mind........glad you enjoyed!

Many blessings
Always,
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

[This message has been edited by Enotneicna (edited 04-23-2001).]

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