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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2001-04-01 12:22 PM

When dawning gilds,
...far eastern skies,
and morn outpours,
...to night's demise,
bright stars of night,
...to heavens banished,
soft glow of moon,
...by Helios vanquished,
upon a far,
...and distant peak,
first rays of sun,
...high mountains seek,
as comes new day,
...'cross landscape creeping,
nature rising,
...from her sleeping,
betwixt the night,
...and light of day,
displays the bloom,
...of dawn's bouquet.

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

1 posted 2001-04-01 12:29 PM

WOW!!! This is perfect, perfect, PERFECT!!!!
Every image, every word.....just fantastic!!!
Wonderful read!

Mike

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

2 posted 2001-04-01 01:23 PM

Exactly. (pointing up to PackratMike's response) (o:
Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-04-01 02:11 PM

Mike~
Florida *sighhhhhhhhhhhhs*
My how lovely are your thoughts this day !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2001-04-01 02:19 PM

loved it

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-04-01 03:50 PM

This is nice Mike...James

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2001-04-01 08:28 PM

Very lovely, Mike!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2001-04-01 08:57 PM

Wonderful writing, Mike!

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

8 posted 2001-04-01 09:23 PM

Mike....this is one of the most beautiful bouquets I've seen!

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

9 posted 2001-04-01 09:51 PM

Mike~
Dawn is a beautiful sight through your poetic eyes...thank you for weaving it the way that only you can do...a breathtaking sight~

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

10 posted 2001-04-01 10:43 PM

Mike...."..dawn's bouquet..." a lovely image. Bob

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

11 posted 2001-04-01 11:21 PM

A beautiful picture. Joyce

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

12 posted 2001-04-02 07:04 AM

The first place to see the sun each morning (from within the shores of the USA) - Standing atop Cadillac Mtn. in Acadia National Park, Bar Harbor, Maine... I've actually only been there once, but it's a breathtaking and awesome feeling.... This poem is superb, my friend...

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

13 posted 2001-04-02 09:37 PM

'Tis a lovely portrait you paint!

Take care,
Melissa~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

14 posted 2001-04-02 09:43 PM

You painted it perfectly, my friend.

jwesley

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

15 posted 2001-04-02 09:51 PM

Lovely vision!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

16 posted 2001-05-15 09:37 AM

...and your first book will be published when?

A wonderful read....

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