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thecraig
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0 posted 2001-04-03 02:07 AM



Fairywhispers hear the ear,
softly seasons mix & merge,
Planets, Solar Systems, magnetically placed.
Drawn to where their core belongs,
some to waste,
& destructive wrong.
Others to life,
& fast bird song;

Hoots & roars, alligator snores,
moo's & meows, .
harmonies row.
Fairy whispers,
have my bow.
ribbons & sparkles,
gardens with glee,
is the eye quick enough tinkle fairy to see;

Listening, Listening,
is that her pitta patter
maybe a raindrop,
yes, is, the latter;

Now on the earth,
here while she drinks,
living on her crust,
helping her to think.
a part of her now,
raised from the dust
guiding her future,
please let not earth rust.
                            RecordedPoems



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1 posted 2001-04-03 02:11 AM


Oh I really liked this one, thanks for a nice evening read!  Went to the recorded poems site as well, and enjoyed - thank you.
helen smith
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2 posted 2001-04-03 04:43 PM


it is lovely Craig    .your words are  so delicately chosen    and your message  so hardhitting.  beautiful images. thank you          ...
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3 posted 2001-05-15 09:40 AM


This whisked and whispered me right along...

well done....

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