Open Poetry #13 |
A Meadow Far Away |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A Meadow Far Away You thought someone loved you but now you don't know for sure. But you do know you are alone and love isn't smiling for you anymore. It doesn't even visit you in any shape or form. Your dream has lost it's hope and love is approaching scorn. And thru it all she misses me not half as much as I miss her. And someday we will explore these feelings and expose them for what they were. Til then swing low sweet chariot for my heart has lost it's way and just this time I beg this ride to a lush meadow far away. For I have no place for my love to go. I have lost the reason for my love to grow. And now I have a heart wanting to know how to smile on a lonely day in a meadow far away. Jameslee@March31,2001 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I liked the reference to "swing low, sweet chariot"....a sad piece, and I hope your answers are soon found.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael The meadow is a resting place To smell the rose of your embrace. And dew will cover up the thorns Of this I'm sure one of these morns. A beautiful write. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
go and find that meadow James. . . from the heart. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sunshine, Seymour and Sven for your nice words...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm in a meadow smiling now...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, always look deep into your loving heart and find the beauty within the garden of the earth, for soon true love will find you and you will share this happiness forever; until then, believe in yourself and nurture these flowers with love! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! Love, Noah Eaton |
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