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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

0 posted 2001-04-30 02:34 PM

You touched me
with a forever
I can never have
One that was never
meant to be
and to taste it
even for an instant
is more painful
with the knowing
that ties barely bound
will remain
to remind
there are no answers
only fate's twisted humor
giving visions
of a life never to be led
emotions, unable to give
to a heart that beats
in rhythm with my own

~SEA~

* thank you PK, for the heartbreaking inspiration*

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-30-2001).]

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

1 posted 2001-04-30 02:38 PM

SEA, This is beautiful.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-04-30 02:42 PM

only fate's twisted humor
giving visions
of a life never to be led
emotions, unable to give
to a heart that beats
in rhythm with my own
=========================

dont I know baby ... dont I know,
beautiful echo Sea...and you already know I feel every word.
well done sweet poetess.

There are two lasting bequests
that we can hope to instill in our children
one is roots ...
the other ... wings.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

3 posted 2001-04-30 02:43 PM

~SEA~ with compassion that one can only admire. For the love and inspiration you give to others is a symthony of music to my ears. I thank you for being there for someone you hold dear.

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2001-04-30 03:17 PM

Wow, I inspired a SEA poem? Yes! Awesome, and thanks for the kind words you always have for me.

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

5 posted 2001-04-30 03:20 PM

SEA....nicely woven. Soft...quiet. Bob

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-04-30 03:23 PM

RMW's comment...soft, quiet...peaceful understanding....

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-04-30 03:53 PM

SEA I related to this so very well, from beginning to end. I did wonder about the title, because both words nearly mean the same....the poem is so related to something I've been going through and it goes in my library.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-04-30 04:58 PM

Enjoyed this Sea...James

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-04-30 06:07 PM

wow PK, you should be honored. . . this is great SEA. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

10 posted 2001-04-30 06:12 PM

Good Poetry. Joyce

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

11 posted 2001-05-01 10:51 AM

"One that was never
meant to be
and to taste it
even for an instant
is more painful
with the knowing
that ties barely bound
will remain
to remind
there are no answers
only fate's twisted humor
giving visions
of a life never to be led
emotions, unable to give
to a heart that beats
in rhythm with my own"

Said it all for me - D___d good writing

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

12 posted 2001-05-01 02:37 PM

nicely done and touching, SEA.

Michael

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

13 posted 2001-05-01 02:41 PM

that was fast nice beat to that heart o yuh

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

14 posted 2001-05-01 02:56 PM

Sea--yes, sometimes life does have a quirky sense of humor...but maybe there will be another life...to do again what wasn't done before. Enjoyed this poem.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2001-05-02 08:44 PM

ohhh SEA~ HUGS to you....

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

16 posted 2001-05-02 09:29 PM

things like this can happen... hehe
enjoy it while it lasts....

a write of longing, pain, emptiness.... confusion.... and infatuation

nicely put.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

17 posted 2001-05-02 09:52 PM

SEA, you ask an incredible question here. Which is better? To taste the unattainable or not? I can hear Dulcinea singing....

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

18 posted 2001-05-02 09:56 PM

If only you knew how much this relates to my situation right now, this really touched me and hurt to read, thank you for sharing it~

Take care,
Melissa~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

19 posted 2002-01-20 01:31 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Susan, this is so so sad, my heart goes out to you and hope that now love shines in your heart (kiss on cheek) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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