Open Poetry #13 |
Kisses and Related Blisses |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kisses and Related Blisses Seems like he lived his whole life thinking she was the one. She was not as she was always the next one or the next one. After a while he could barely keep up with the program of a seemingly endless procession of break my heart wanna be's passing before eyes full of admiration. Some would briefly taste the fruit of let's make love flirtation. If he could admire surely he would desire their company. Sometimes he would speak of his desire so easily and openly. "I don't know if you can handle a man like me. A man who seems to require kisses and related blisses constantly. A man wanting and needing a woman to touch and admire. A man full of juices and burning with desire." In the beginning they would always swear that they were the one that possessed the kiss. In the end he could see how fast they would run amiss. That's when he would think out loud..."Look's like she's not the one that I will miss. Perhaps the bliss lies within the pleasure of the next kiss or the next kiss." Jameslee@May18,2001 |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I don't know if you can handle a man like me. A man who seems to require kisses and related blisses constantly. A man wanting and needing a woman to touch and admire. A man full of juices and burning with desire." oh yes.....I could..... James, this is a favorite now and I'm keeping this! ~SEA |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I like this James.....very nice writing!! Nathan |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Wow! enjoyed reading! ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . I know this feeling well. . . excellent James. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh sugar...this is so great...I especially like this line and all it says...Some would briefly taste the fruit of let's make love flirtation... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Tier, Nate, Sven, Sea and Paula...when I wrote this poem I incorporated some parts of another poem that I wrote just previous to this...a shorter version...but perhaps a little too much of an adult theme...I can't recall if I posted the shorter version or not...I have been trying to decide if I will call it A Man/A Sexy Woman...or Light My Fire...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooo beautifully said, sweet friend, may true love come to him on his next kiss and fill him with eternal happiness! (smiles) I love it! Soooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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