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Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

0 posted 2001-03-30 11:01 PM

Fingertip touches
Trace the whispers of my heart
Awakening me
~

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-03-30 11:08 PM

A very whispy, lovely Haiku, well done!

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2001-03-31 01:28 AM

Just A Woman ....Yes...to what Mysteria said. Very soft and quiet. Bob

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-03-31 01:48 AM

soft and quiet, yes, but somehow startling, like a stranger who whispers your name...this made me think, smile, and remember.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2001-03-31 01:49 AM

So many memories from such few words. Well done. joyce

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

5 posted 2001-03-31 03:25 AM

yes you are awaking yourself....

Bernie
a

a day keeeps the world

'g

Bernie Slicker

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-03-31 01:05 PM

wonderful. . . so many feelings here. . . to touch the heart like this. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2001-04-01 01:37 AM

I like this very much. Quietly sensual.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Panne415
Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 104
San Antonio

8 posted 2001-04-01 06:18 AM

JAW, Beautiful Senyru. Can even see a couple of interpretations in this one. I like this very much. Panne

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-04-01 07:18 AM

Beautiful...much feeling in these few words

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2001-04-01 11:01 AM

Just A Woman,
Agree with Panne on this one.

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