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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-03-30 09:21 PM

Expertly dodging my stare
While the crowd looks on,
You do that so well
And while I have to understand,
It still breaks my heart.
I think you're beginning to shed me
As I'm passing before your eyes
In continuous and less alluring circles.
But lest I doubt you,
I have to remain here with my hope
As close to my chest as is your heart.
You couldn't believe that its you I want,
While I can't admit that perhaps
You're more the reason than I said.

In the worst of times, let me drift beneath the cloak of Oblivion. I favor the night as it favors me.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-03-30 09:38 PM

Dear Lady I think its time you move on. I notice a few of our "gentleman" poets are looking for someone as nice as you. Hopefully you will find someone who will treat you with the gentle love you deserve.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2001-03-30 09:48 PM

Temptress, you describe an emotion I have been on the wrong end of....and you do it very well...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-03-30 10:03 PM

Thanks for your responses so far, but while I like to describe feelings, they aren't always feelings that I have at present. Hope I don't worry anyone.

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-03-30 10:06 PM

Oh Temptress, I'll try to call off the ad I put in the "Looking for Mr. Right" magazine for you. (LOL) I'll try not to take you so literal next time.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-03-31 08:52 AM

Inot..
Thank you, but one never really does know..do they?

I didn't mean to sound sarcastic if I did. Apologies...Thank you so much for reading.

In the worst of times, let me drift beneath the cloak of Oblivion. I favor the night as it favors me.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-03-31 01:09 PM

I've been here myself. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

7 posted 2001-03-31 01:45 PM

it sucks to get dodged.... ignored.... god i hate it when that happens.... and trust me... it has happened to me....

and i still can't figure out why.....

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-03-31 02:48 PM

I guess we've all been on the wrong end of this emotion, I'm glad this isn't a real experience, who would dodge a lovely young lady like you!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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