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Until Tomorrow Dawns
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Until Tomorrow Dawns |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Until Tomorrow Dawns ~*Marge Tindal*~  Until the dawning of tomorrow peeks across a new horizon I will fondly think of you smiling with the sun-in-rising We will meet, as we have done a thousand times before I will walk this day with you through the Spirits of the lore On Metis wings of Eagle you will fly my way and I in feathered softness will wait the coming day We will share the soaring of two souls in flight wending our way into soft coming of the night *For a VERY special ~Warrior~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Until the dawning of tomorrow peeks across a new horizon I will fondly think of you smiling with the sun-in-rising ========================== On Metis wings of Eagle you will fly my way and I in feathered softness will wait the coming day =========================== Ahhhh yes... magic is made when this muse calls to you... "smiling with the sun-in-rising" "and I in feathered softness" only you could give us those wonderful images. well done Whitefeather.  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"On Metis wings of eagle" =========================== I love that line! Wonderful Marge!~ You write of your heritage so perfectly, with that added "Margie" flair and sentiment, I truly enjoy these glimpses into your heart~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
quote: Captivating, Marge...sure the warrior thought so as well!  |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The picture and words to match beautifully done. Enjoyed the feeling it gave me. |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
very lovely poem the last stanza was especially good wonderful work |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
....we ALL hear you..... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Until the dawning of tomorrow I will walk this day with you through the Spirits of the lore On Metis wings of Eagle you will fly my way and I in feathered softness will wait the coming day ------------------------ Such a beatiful poem. You have me daydreaming about flying away now. But thats ok. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
HOW GENTLY MY SOUL IS STIRRED BY THESE WORDS BLESS YOU MAIDEN FOR REMEMBERING OUR FLIGHTS WARRIOR |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ He is the heart and soul of my inspiration. Thank you, my friend. Melissa~ Oh ... I'm sooooo glad that line touched you. My ~Warrior~ will be so proud to know that ! Thank you ... thank you ! Elizabeth~ He sends me little gems of inspiration without even realizing he's done it. I love to surprise him ! I did with this one ! Thank you. INot2B~ Thank you. A marriage of thought and a canvas to paint it on .. I'm a happy poet ! TradeWind~ Thank you for thinking so. Welcome on board. Karilea~ Hugging you for your thoughts. Thanks, gal. Dee~ Take to wing, my friend. The soar to evermore awaits ! SoaringEagle~ My ~Warrior~ ... You ARE my wings ... Thank YOU for taking me on these flights. I love you. ~*Maiden*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And the song of the spirit is a love song For distance has no meaning in dreams Two hearts entwined by loving minds And time isn't the barrier it seems. What beauty you have written here, Marge... an extra-special delight. *S* |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Marge, what beautiful words you speak through this lovely poem. KateBlessings Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, this is so beautiful! The imagery is just amazing, and the idea of meeting your "warrior" during the magical time is just breathtaking. This one is going into my library. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Very lovely presentation..... intense and beautiful thoughts.... how beautiful that you know such a warrior!!!! this is excellent!!!!! nicely done.....you're a poet!!!!!! hehe.... YEP!!! you ARE! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Marge, this is so incredibly sweet and beautiful...I truly loved it.  Would it be all right if I used it in the next passions newsletter? *Krista Knutson* |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Magical once again from your penheart.... thank you for this....just the dawning I wanted to see... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Thank YOU for the lovely thought of rhyme. Hugs a'plenty, my friend. Kate~ Just my heart talking again. ~My Warrior~ is the bestest soul-mate a lady could have. LoveBug~ Thank you for your sweet reply. His spirit soars in my soul. VanDana~ Thank you. Always a pleasure to see your smile. Doreen~ Yes ... 'beautiful' is an apt description for our 'oneness'. Thank you and Tee-Hee on 'poet' ! Krista~ Yes, and thank you for asking. This piece has a special place in my heart. GreenEyes~ Thank you for enjoying it so and for letting me know. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You grasshopper are doing Wings of Eagles proud! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ LOL ! He will love hearing you refer to me as 'grasshopper'. I smile ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
he must be a very special warrior to deserve such wonderful words... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
love love love the photo to go with your beautiful poem dear Marge.... SEA |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very beautiful presentation Marge....thanks for sharing!! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jamie~ 'very' indeed ! Thank you. SEA~ Inspired by the glow of his rising on my horizon. *Hugs*, hon. Nate, my friend~ Thank YOU for enjoying. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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