Open Poetry #13 |
- Butterfly Dance Tanka - |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Butterfly Dance Tanka Glide on gentle breeze flutter, graceful butterfly dance in sunshine kisses paint the land with Springtime dreams o' exquisite winged artist ~*By Melissa Honeybee*~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 03-30-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, what a beautiful visual you've painted with these words, just lovely Melissa! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* "Winged artist.." I love it..beautiful |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"....dance in sunshine kisses...." now did you do that on purpose? {~,^} |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
just perfect Melis ... your words dance like the butterfly you are oh you speak to me in riddles |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
VEry beautiful, Melissa!!! Enjoyed the feel and look of this piece. I didn't count the syllables, the flow was great, the imaging wonderful, surely it must be withing the parameters of a tanka! |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, wonderful tanka! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Lovely, lovely thoughts ... Delicate lacing ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Kit, Temptress, Karilea, Janet Marie, Vas, Chels and Marge: Thank you! I enjoyed writing this tanka, so glad you stopped by to read it~ hehe Karilea, maybe, maybe not, not telling Take care, Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 03-31-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Your gorgeous words always flitter with such beauty and grace, sweet friend, I love butterflies so much and this poem made me so excited for all the flowers to bloom soon so I can go outside and find all of the butterflies flittering again! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true butterfly of friendship to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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