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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-03-22 02:09 PM

Rose Of Love

~*By Melissa Honeybee*~

Dewdrops laced with love
petals of velvet pristine
crimson majesty

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-03-22 02:14 PM

draws honeybee's greet
upon dew's drop to replete
nectar sweetly sipped

Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-03-22 02:20 PM

Karilea - what a lovely reply, thank you!

Take care,
Melissa~

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-03-22 04:26 PM

petals of velvet pristine
===================

what a very lovely line that is Melis...
wonderul imagery in this

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

Chelsea~
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since 2001-02-09

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Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-03-22 07:50 PM

missy,

a divine senryu,
you are so good at
these!

Just A Woman
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since 2001-03-10

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5 posted 2001-03-22 08:30 PM

Captured beautifully!

"When people show you who they are, believe them"

~Maya Angelou~

Alwye

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In the space between moments

6 posted 2001-03-22 10:47 PM

Absolutely gorgeous haiku Melissa! You have such a talent for these and I love reading them!

*Krista Knutson*

"Can't run fast enough
Can't hide I can't fly
I'm struggling with the limits of this ordinary life..." ~Tracy Chapman

mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind

7 posted 2001-03-23 12:54 PM

Love is majestic, as are roses. Beautiful Haiku!

Marge Tindal

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8 posted 2001-03-23 07:18 AM

Melissa~
This is sheeer beauty !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

kaile

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9 posted 2001-03-23 10:02 PM

i see you are getting better with this form...

well done

Butterflies_dont_cry
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10 posted 2001-03-23 11:33 PM

Simply put....perfection!

Kit McCallum

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11 posted 2001-03-24 09:50 AM

Beautifully written Melissa ... you have such a talent for capturing the essence of your thoughts in so few words, just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Moon Dust

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12 posted 2001-03-24 11:41 AM

Of thorns will protect,
And gaurd against enemies,
Of majesty's rose.

Nice, I loved it

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people

13 posted 2001-03-24 04:29 PM

Wow, great job with this haiku

! The visual worked great with it.

"Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
"Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it."
BothUnknown

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

14 posted 2001-03-24 06:50 PM

Thank you everyone, I enjoyed writing this haiku, once I saw that picture, the words poured out of me~

Take care,
Melissa~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2002-03-24 04:56 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love are always spellbinding, this one sung to my heart! (kiss on cheek) May this rose forever blossom with true love in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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