Open Poetry #13 |
- Rose Of Love Haiku - |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Rose Of Love ~*By Melissa Honeybee*~ Dewdrops laced with love petals of velvet pristine crimson majesty |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
draws honeybee's greet upon dew's drop to replete nectar sweetly sipped |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Karilea - what a lovely reply, thank you! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
petals of velvet pristine =================== what a very lovely line that is Melis... wonderul imagery in this oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, a divine senryu, you are so good at these! |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Captured beautifully! "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely gorgeous haiku Melissa! You have such a talent for these and I love reading them! *Krista Knutson* |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Love is majestic, as are roses. Beautiful Haiku! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ This is sheeer beauty ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i see you are getting better with this form... well done |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Simply put....perfection! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully written Melissa ... you have such a talent for capturing the essence of your thoughts in so few words, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Of thorns will protect, And gaurd against enemies, Of majesty's rose. Nice, I loved it Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, great job with this haiku ! The visual worked great with it. "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone, I enjoyed writing this haiku, once I saw that picture, the words poured out of me~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love are always spellbinding, this one sung to my heart! (kiss on cheek) May this rose forever blossom with true love in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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