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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2001-04-01 06:21 AM

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~*~  A single gesture  ~*~

~*~  His smile, so warm and tender  ~*~

~*~  Warms the coldest heart  ~*~

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Panne415
Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 104
San Antonio

1 posted 2001-04-01 06:26 AM

Mysteria, A nice Senyru. Now don't whine like you said you do in your critique line -

but this is not a Haiku - which must paint a scene in Nature. A senryu(pronounced Send Roo) is the same as Haiku but it can be about emotions and intangibles etc whereas a Haiku can not be about such things. I liked this Senyru - I hope "he" knows his effect/affect on you. Panne

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-04-01 06:31 AM

Oh dip****! Just went to change the thing and you beat me to the gun, what the heck is anyone doing up at three in the morning LOL, shows you are awake - I was just testing you! I welcome your comments and thank you. However, I do notice that people now are not sticking to that rule, and seem just to be saying anything in a 5,7,5, syllable pattern, or even with Tanka nowadays.

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2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

3 posted 2001-04-01 08:42 AM

I agree. His smile can melt most any hardened heart.
Melton

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-04-01 11:34 AM

This is adorable, I love it, I'm sure that he can do just that with any child or even an adult!

Take care,
Melissa~

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-04-01 02:52 PM

2dalimit: Your name is too cute! I know Mickey will love to hear that too, and I shall tell him next time I see him!

Melissa: I try to have at least 20 minutes of childishness a day, keeps me young! Try it, it works!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-24 05:26 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, Walt Disney is my hero to me, for he has encouraged me to follow my dreams and every time I look and wish upon a star, I dream of kissing my Joanna in front of Cinderellas Castle! (kiss on cheek) Your smiles are contagious, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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