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His Smile (Senyru)
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His Smile (Senyru) |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~*~ His Smile ~*~~*~ * ~*~ A single gesture ~*~ ~*~ His smile, so warm and tender ~*~ ~*~ Warms the coldest heart ~*~ * ~*~  Art ~*Walt Disney*~ http://www.world-wide-art.com ~*~ Mysteria ~*~ © Copyright 2001 All Rights Reserved Take your work seriously, but never yourself. ~*~ Dame Margot Fonteyn ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 04-01-2001).] |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
Mysteria, A nice Senyru. Now don't whine like you said you do in your critique line -  but this is not a Haiku - which must paint a scene in Nature. A senryu(pronounced Send Roo) is the same as Haiku but it can be about emotions and intangibles etc whereas a Haiku can not be about such things. I liked this Senyru - I hope "he" knows his effect/affect on you. Panne |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh dip****! Just went to change the thing and you beat me to the gun, what the heck is anyone doing up at three in the morning LOL, shows you are awake - I was just testing you! I welcome your comments and thank you. However, I do notice that people now are not sticking to that rule, and seem just to be saying anything in a 5,7,5, syllable pattern, or even with Tanka nowadays. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 04-01-2001).] |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I agree. His smile can melt most any hardened heart. Melton |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is adorable, I love it, I'm sure that he can do just that with any child or even an adult! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
2dalimit: Your name is too cute! I know Mickey will love to hear that too, and I shall tell him next time I see him! Melissa: I try to have at least 20 minutes of childishness a day, keeps me young! Try it, it works! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, Walt Disney is my hero to me, for he has encouraged me to follow my dreams and every time I look and wish upon a star, I dream of kissing my Joanna in front of Cinderellas Castle! (kiss on cheek) Your smiles are contagious, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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