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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Driving home this evening a storm threatens the calm heavy clouds reflect my mood an ominous gray cloak tinged with purple rage The night’s eyes engorged a disturbing texture of pulsating ambiguity swollen with caged tears like my own My car is shrinking or maybe it’s the world closing in on me and I am suffocating beneath the weight of something Pulling over to stumble out gasping in the exhaust of passing cars as inquisitive fish faces stare at me from transitory aquariums I am the spectacle that sparks their morbid curiosity that crazy looking woman losing it, losing everything On the side of the road I stand there in the dark the first clap of thunder drowning out my enraged screams surrendured to the storm as it begins to rain.... [This message has been edited by Breathe~ (edited 03-30-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wow wow...loved it Breathe~ where have you been hiding *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Oh...I guess I was once again sucked in, chewed up and spit out by that thing we call life...  How about you? How are you doing? |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You did a really good job at letting it all hang out. Joyce |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
WOW . . . Explosive, Breathe~ A nice "power" piece. Kraw' |
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