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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-03-30 10:37 AM

All the darkness glows--uneasy
a naughty moon be on the rise
and all the time, you thought you teased me
who knew it would be you, despised.

Lyric of your laughter--SLAP.
SILENCE--swallowed, now regret
Each word, each itch, foreveraft
He touched me. I cannot forget.

For that a cloud within my eye,
you cannot forgive
intrigue in my distant smile--
a fingernail
a slack of sail,
I could drift for miles...

and wonder what it's like to live.

*reworked and repost from Open ?? ah, I forget!*

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-03-30 10:49 AM

But I am glad you found it again...a powerful piece.

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2001-03-30 12:39 PM

"and i wonder what it is like to live"

It is great serenity,, i have just started my new life. and i am going to live it to the fullest..
Bernie
a

a day keeps the world

'g.

Bernie Slicker

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-03-30 12:42 PM

quote:
Lyric of your laughter--SLAP.
SILENCE--swallowed, now regret
Each word, each itch, foreveraft
He touched me. I cannot forget.

damn, girl!! i HATE it when that happens.... geez....

but on the bright side ....

quote:
and wonder what it's like to live.

harpo, you already know... y'know??? and that's way cool

gotta run.... work calls.... darnit!!! why do they love me so? lol

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-03-30 12:49 PM

you gave me goose bumps!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-03-30 01:13 PM

All the darkness glows--uneasy
a naughty moon be on the rise
and all the time, you thought you teased me
who knew it would be you, despised.
=============================
Each word, each itch, foreveraft
He touched me. I cannot forget.

For that a cloud within my eye,
you cannot forgive
intrigue in my distant smile--
a fingernail
a slack of sail,
I could drift for miles...

and wonder what it's like to live.
=============================

I need a naughty moon *S*
so many mirrors today ...
*sigh* ...
quiet comfort me twin ... we dont drift alone ...
(it just feels that way)...yadda yadda
hugs baby

me

oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2001-04-02 09:14 PM

Very powerful piece girlie...and you know what its like to live...just DO it

"If you are going to walk on thin ice, you might as well dance!"
-Anonymous

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-02 09:35 PM

You always pack a punch!!! Well done!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2001-04-02 09:45 PM

serenity,

I enjoyed this very much. Such nice imagery, much feeling. Definitely good work. Thank you for sharing this.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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