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for a gorgeous woman-in between the lines
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for a gorgeous woman-in between the lines |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana 
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I've fallen for a southern belle but there is no one I can tell she's beautiful in every way but don't know if I should have my say. She has long, brown hair or maybe black I don't think there's anything she could lack Her poetry flows like the wind and sea but I know she'll never fall for me. I'm just an Irishman living a dream and reality is not as good as it would seem I can barely rhyme or match her free verse and my feelings feel so unrehearsed. So I just read and watch her shine hoping someone is treating her fine because I feel she deserves the best but gosh, I just can't get no rest. Her name is matchless, free as the breeze I can't tell you what it is, but it's not Louise! it rhymes with the lines and in-between she's my secret, the most gorgeous woman I've ever seen! Dennis [This message has been edited by Dennis (edited 03-29-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Go home and give me back my computer! Jeez, I know it's not me, I'm your sister, I'd better warn every woman whose name rhymes with in-between! This is really hard to figure out, Dennis, why don't you just dedicate the poem to her!!!!!  aghhhhhhKathleen Blake |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
let me guess, let me guess! |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
go for it.... best wishes, though I have no idea who it is..... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Reading again to make sure even though the description doesn't fit *G* .... Nope, he didn't say suthern belle... So I'll just wish you good luck! *S* |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Now every woman will be trying to rhyme their with in-between. Very good! At least we know it's not Louise. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well I am not southern but I line in between (MD- PA line) and my name does rhyme as it is Maureen..... but I know it isn't me you mean...*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
LOL!!!! i LOVE it!! if i could rhymne with this i'd be in bliss and satisfy my long desire but since i can't i'll tell you, D, you are an awesome full inspire and maybe someday you will find some woman who'll respond in kind but as for me? oh gosh oh gee oh geez, oh blush oh never mind the days grow short when life's resort is posting loving poetry..... how nice to know your heart is so entwined with Love on bended knee.... oh god, i'm lost without a cost and cannot answer to your plea but i can say your poetry is awesome and so very free one day you'll find somone to rhyme within your title, right on time, until that day, i wish array of colors o n the toss of dime just throw the coin up in the air and i will bless the girl who's there..... [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 03-30-2001).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Dennis, You've got a secret gorgeous woman? No! On this site? You must be the only one . . .  . . . ya, right.Hey, fun poem. Kraw' |
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