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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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With Ease From sleeping hearts, the truth doth lie To clutch to breast, held in a sigh A touch of you, in easy rest Among the memories, that manifest. You are the hues, that paint my world, Though mixed at times becoming swirled. My rainbowed days and starlit nights Upon your presence, splay delights, Of needing, wanting, desiring, too As morn does rise to leave it's dew. You are, I am, we both wait for Tomorrow's time, reversal of The light of day for want of more In shadow's night to share, explore. ~Wynter... *not sure what I mean by this at all...  "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-30-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ok, you're writing beautiful poetry these days! keep it up!!!!!!!!!!! Kathleen Blake |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Not sure either *L* but the first stanza got me, and the last... You are, I am, we both wait for Tomorrow's time, reversal of The light of day for want of more In shadow's night to share, explore Very, very nice. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You are the hues, that paint my world, Though mixed at times becoming swirled." That is just sooooo pretty  very nice SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, Said the spider to the fly. Enjoyed the read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Irish Rose thanks Kathleen...I appreciate you...always Poetic Knight the first phrase was yours..*s the rest..well it just came out of nowhere SEA thanks ...don't forget time changes tomorrow night..I think I had that on my mind, also Seymour hmmmmm...you always make me laugh..and I haven't the faintest idea why... thank you for your thoughts ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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