Open Poetry #13 |
Today - Tommorrow |
bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Today * Tommorrow . Today Wind Howling, Chimes chimming, Rain Pit-Pattering Clouds Banging Waves Rumbling Sirens Screaming Leaf's Dancing Trees Swaying Branches Falling Windows Closing Coffee Brewing Chili Simmering Candles Burning Tommorrow? Bernie Slicker |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
This reminds me how much I love daytime storms. And how much I HATE the nighttime ones. Wonderful imagery. I envy you your ocean, Bernie. "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tomorrow sun bright first light walk right upon beach stray shells gulls bell salted air lessens cares harbored tight to think back on yesterday's storms |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMM storms always make me want to cuddle...you bring the blanket ok? This is great Bernie... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love it!!! Every word! Kathleen Blake |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Jus A Woman, thank you very much, ones ocean is large enough for others to share.. Sunshine, Thank you for the tommorrow,,, really should bring that to the top with my part of the poem....would be putting a real nice compliment to each other.. Paula, Bring the blanket,,, ok i have to go buy a new one though... Kathleen, thank you for reading. glad you loved it. '' A a day keeps the world 'g Bernie Slicker |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
Oh I just love the calm after the storm...its just trying to storm here now...the wind is wicked |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bernie~ Let's meet at your place for leftover chili ! Nicely done little duo's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
thank you for reading foreverinbluejeans and Marge. By the way leftover chili is usually better than the first day of it.....lol thanks again Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This s a lovely poem and it tells of the true beauties of the present, but also explains that no one can plan the future! I enjoyed it! ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is my today, right down to the chili I'll be making! I loved this.....and storms are so for snugglin..... SEA |
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