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the light of your heart
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the light of your heart |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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the light of your heart shines brighter than the sun at midday and more brilliant than the moon at midnight it makes me want to run outside and dance naked in your rays letting them caress my body and heal my heart piercing my soul and showing me the things that I had long ago forgotten such is the light of your heart it's a light that I hope is never extinguished ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
John.. Here's hoping that the light will never be extinguished rather through self or someone else. Beautiful and heartfelt work, friend.  still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sven..."...and heal my heart..." Well said. Bob |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love these words, your romantic side sir is always beautiful....enjoyed greatly....  Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Jenn, thank you. . . the light will always shine. . .  Bob, thank you my friend. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Lauren, thank you. . . . . . I'm glad that you liked it. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh.........beautiful Sven. Lovely words from the romantic. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I feel this way also Sven when I realize someone cares for me...James |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
A beautiful gentle touch.........just lovely!
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nourish that light, Sven. It's a keeper. Joyce |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Such is the light of a loving heart. Enjoyed! |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
a beautiful poem, liked very much! AP |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
GS, thank you. . . glad that you liked. . . James, it's a feeling that we all should have. . . thanks. . . Just a Woman, thank you. . . there's nothing like that touch. . . Joyce, you're right, it's definitely a keeper. . . thank you. . . JLR, a loving heart always shines brightest. . . thank you. . . AP, thank you very much. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sven, This is excellent! Such a light. Very romantic.Michael Proust- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Still yet another beautifully romantic tribute to love---a dream of a read here, sir sven! |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Watch out for the police when you go outside naked sven. LOL Hope the light never fades to black. |
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