Open Poetry #13 |
To Be Found |
Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
What do you say to the night When it seems that no one cares How do you hold it together When you're the only one there If tomorrow fell upon you Could you handle all it's wieght And learn to love again In this world filled with hate Could you heal your broken heart Or leave it alone to die When you know a certain truth You'll never know if you don't try So pick up the pieces and move on Don't let them drag you down Reach for a far away star There's love there to be found |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jeffrey, Thanks so much, my friend, for this wonderful poem... I feel like I might use your advice... and start "picking up the pieces", so to say... Regards, Sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful sentiments Jeffrey ... such an upbeat and inspirational closing! A perfect message to help one take charge and move on to new adventures, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 03-29-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I truly believe these words, Jeffrey, it as if a lighthouse keeps us going, a wonderful lighthouse and we just keep going because the light is on in our souls. Good to see you again! Kathleen Blake |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Very true Jeffery.....never give up on love!! Very nice SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Could you heal your broken heart Or leave it alone to die When you know a certain truth You'll never know if you don't try So pick up the pieces and move on Don't let them drag you down Reach for a far away star There's love there to be found ======================== ahhh yes.... in the healing comes wisdom ... very cool poem jeff-gator love the promise this one holds and your cadence was melodic... and HEY!!! great to see you here again too oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thnx you guys ... seems to me if life is a journey I always end up on the dirt roads, but I shall carry on and conquer life AND love ... eventually! |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
Too bad we have to learn the hard way sometimes...and dont let go before we ruin other chances |
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