Open Poetry #13 |
Drowning Bliss |
Embers_Before_God Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 101USA |
In the depths I’m drowning bliss, the thoughts of those— the ones I’ll miss— the sole remains of carnal souls, filled with blanks, chocked with holes. Seeing the eyes, the fateful stare, their murdered breath upon the air, hope on a string at distressful hour, thoughts that sting and often devour. Hidden face behind the wind, behind the place where devils walk in. Still, I sulk and stalk, stealing will until they balk. Crying tears for thoughts of those, the sudden fears, I cannot close. Yet try again, I must, lest my sin fades to dust. From my heart, I yell, ripping apart thoughts of Hell, still too soon for those I’ll miss, under the moon drowning bliss. TkB © Copyright 2001 All Rights Reserved Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me. [This message has been edited by Embers_Before_God (edited 04-11-2001).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very powerful piece here. Thanks for sharing this ! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was superb! However, I feel thinking so much about what will be instead of what is around us to enjoy, is very disabling, and destructive. Fantanstic piece though. ~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
This is truly a work of art, my friend, and I enjoyed reading this again and again. Your talent is simply amazing. Privilege to read poetic art. ~JLMD "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Embers_Before_God Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 101USA |
Thanks to you all for reading this simple post...Embers Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me. |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
I am amazed always when I read anything you've written, my friend. You are a fine writer,a fine man. I must say though that the figure at the top scared me. Katie Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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