Open Poetry #13 |
Where Have I Been (I woke up) |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Is it something of this world Is it something I can know Is it something I can plant Is it something that would grow Is it something I can touch Is it something that would show Tell me what is on your mind Please give me some kind of hint You gave me chance after chance And each one of them I've spent You always were so patient When I was getting off the track When I was straying further on You were there to bring me back Is it something in this room Is it something in your eyes Is it something made to last Is it something that won’t die Tell me if I might be warmer When I ask you only sigh Sometimes I wish to end this And ask you what you’re after Would my simple mind be met With sweet and gentle laughter Sometimes when you stop the search You discover so much more It’s not a guess, I know its love Is that what you're looking for [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-20-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: that verse, my friend, says it all.... why ask why?...... enjoy it without question.... thank you for the read |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yes |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you guys for giving this a try yuh |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is fantastic Walt... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Neat awakening, friend o' mine. (o: Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
nice write... enjoyed the read Walt. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you all ever so much yuh [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-27-2001).] |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
I think this is fantasmic! You have all these questions and then realize why ask why. Twistingly enough, you still end with the question, "Is that what you're looking for." I believe there should be some sort of balance between all of the questions and accepting things/people for what/who they are or are not. You've got my brain going tonight and eye thank you. nicework |
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