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thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
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0 posted 2001-05-21 05:43 AM



Teeth may not be straighter
on the other side of the fence,
is the wisdom with the fighter ,
when the other teeth are dense;

Whips knives, guns, lasso's
Mad cow at the slaughter,
house waiting there confused
Dear & Ducks roam the wild
thin air saving lives,
humans gifted houses,
children, husbands, wives.

Little lambs upon the field
feel the heavy rain
slips & slides are terror
guiding to an open drain;

Brushing with danger
rushing priming force,
striving,
reason expanding
the source.
Tighter & tauter
balanced & smoothed,
thrusting ranges beyond
being used;

© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
Brad Majors
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Georgia
1 posted 2001-05-21 02:22 PM


I love this!
Waseem Cheema
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Pakistan
2 posted 2001-05-22 02:26 AM


I enjoed it
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