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DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

0 posted 2001-04-23 03:39 AM

One quite night I dreamed of a softness
The touch of lips I have yet to taste
Once dreamed of never to be forgotten
I will yearn until love I have faced

Until time finds the one I dreamed
Held within these arms I mustconfess
Never will another night pass by me
I don't go wanting that sleeps caress

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-04-23 04:15 AM

I really like the title Don. It sets up the verses very well.....I enjoyed the images you portrayed!

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spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-04-23 05:01 AM

Enjoy your poem...James

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

3 posted 2001-04-23 09:39 AM

this is absolutely lovely.
the flow, the rhythm, the longing....
sigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

4 posted 2001-04-23 04:03 PM

Thank you all for taking the time to read this poem. The dream that inspired it was more intense than these words can convey. They can never let you feel the loss of lonelyness or the memory of the touch. That dream was more real than any I have ever experienced before.
Your words of praise are greatly appreciated.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2001-04-23 09:33 PM

Uhm....lovely!!! I found this soothing..

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2001-04-23 09:36 PM

Lovely. Sopmetimes it doesn't pay to wake up. Joyce

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2001-05-21 03:30 PM

don....i found this in the back...had to bring it up....i know you are still in pain....but the caress you seek is just a dream away......have faith...helen

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