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A triolet, after Austin Dobson's A Kiss
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A triolet, after Austin Dobson's A Kiss |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
I'll Not Follow Rose left me today But I think I'll not follow. In her very odd way Rose left me today. She had merely to say "All that's left is but sorrow." Rose left me today But I think I'll not follow. S Arthur Grey 3.27.01 Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's? J.E.James [This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (edited 03-27-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love the triolet form! and would dearly love to see more...one of the loveliest most delicate forms of interlace poetry there is... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions S Arthur Grey! What a wonderfully flowing introduction to your work. A beautiful and tender piece, I hope to read more!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A poet who writes in format... That'll get my attention every time... This is wonderful, my newbie friend... Let's see more... and do check your email for a special greeting...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most beautiful rendition indeed. Welcome to Passions! I for one certainly hope you enjoy your new home! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, a fine poem. Tailored, crafted. Welcome to the forum.. It's good to see this, and by the way some call me "Rose" Kathleen Blake |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Serenity, Kit, Nan, Sunshine, Rose, Thank you all for your kind comments of welcome! Glad to hear from a few lovers of format. Your remarks will inspire me to use this form again, and some others. And Rose, there was a Rose in my life for a time. Perhaps the subconscious was at work here, as she was not in mind when I wrote this. Perhaps . . . Thanks again. S Arthur Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's? |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I think the triolet is very lovely, and some day when I am very brave, I shall have to tease my pen with one.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I must have missed this the first go round..I, too, love form... *s Maureen/Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
The Message is there your flower has taken her beauty. Your words speak that with warm heart |
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