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Still In Love With You
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Still In Love With You |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Intro: When love gets shook up and things don't look up, you better brace up to the part cause all that you know about how love goes comes straight out of the heart. vs 1 And the blues those lonely love lost blues, oh they can make the days grow long when you got a heart that's got no home and you're left out all alone, outside the love you always knew. vs 2 And love such deep and daring love will drive a normal man insane when every day is dark with pain seems there's no sunshine only rain while I'm still in love with you. vs 3 And the nights those lonely silent nights they come to say you're gone don't know how I can carry on I can't find out what went wrong and I'm still in love with you. vs 4 And this life yeah this only lonely life is full of sorrow and pain when the heart gets rearranged and the blues they seem so strange while I'm still in love with you. ending to fade: Mercy what can a lonely man do in a big mess with the blues Yeah, I'm still in love with you. © Eric True The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I hear this...I really do! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sing it Sunshine! You can do it!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey babycakes!  watchya doin' hiding here in 13? I loved this--and I'm with Kari--I too was humming along, thought I heard a harp whining a bit in the background--bravo, and encore! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
E-babers ya know Im loving this... This reads just like a bluesy Van song... your cadence and melodic gift of rhyme always stand out in your work... as does the depth of the emotions. this is a bittersweet tune here sweet poet-pal ... one day I just gotta hear ya sing one beautiful song Eric, and seeing your name back today makes me smile. missed your presence of kind here in the forums.  me |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Eric....this is so lovely/lonely and yes I can hear it too...song so soft...almost an echo...hugs |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Believe me, you DON'T want to hear me sing. *G* But you sure are playing my song! *S* This is beautiful, ethome! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
couldn't make up my mind, which verse I like best, so I have to choose all. I hope you won't sing the blues to long. let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Janet I appreciate the bluesy thing |
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