Open Poetry #13 |
The Paging System |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
got your call today, ******** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
isn't technology wonderful?? great poem Lauren. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I like this. seems i have played this game of catch me if you can. great poem |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
I think we've paged all of our selves into another chapter... I don't know that I like the ending... hugs... |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
I guess I'm old fashioned. It took me a long time to get an answering machine. Your poem shows us how hard it is to find time today. I think we have to many options for getting messages to each other. In a way, it makes life more conplicated. Once again, I liked the old days when the phone was either busy or not. You did a fine job. Roger |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
technology tag huh? well, its ALWAYS nice to be missed clever dialogue and theme...could sense the subtle longing. well done poetess emerald eyes *S* peace to you jm tis never easy being a moth, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Very cleverly written. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ I hate the tech world...*LOL* thanks for stopping by to read....hugs to you... ~~~ Alan~ I think at some point we all have, sometimes it is impossible to "catch" the one you are looking for... thanks for your thoughts... ~~~~~ Decaflame~ another chapter indeed....") thanks for reading and replying, I appreciate that much...hugs to you... ~~~ thepoeticplumber~ I much prefer the phone....I'd rather hear the voice, then play tag with the pagers...*L* thanks much for your view...I just may skip this pager right across the lake...*L* ~ Janet Marie~ Fun to play...*L* NOT it is very nice to be missed...thanks my friend...you have added a smile to my face.. Marge~ thanks for your words, always... ~~ Greeneyes~ ***** Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever." [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-18-2001).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I have a friend just like this. She's so hard to catch up with. So much for technology... Good one! Michael Proust- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice one |
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