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HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

0 posted 2001-05-17 08:20 PM

When I look into the mirror,
I do not like what I see,
I am an awful person,
You will never know the real me.

Sadness have secluded me,
from my family and my friends,
It tears me up inside,
Will this tourment ever end?

You say you care about me,
But I'm forever left alone,
So I shed my tears in solitude,
With no arms to call my own.

They tell me I am beautiful,
But I am lost inside myself,
Trapped in my world of darkness,
While I scream and shout for help.

I hide behind a thousand tears,
Which you will never see,
I wish this could be differn't,
You will never know the real me.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-17 08:22 PM

Welcome to the forum, if you keep writing, people will know you...through your poetry, it's a sure thing...believe me.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-05-17 09:21 PM

Although this is a heart-wrenching write, I hope you find all that you seek, here in the blue walls of Passions, among those poets who may soon become a bit of wisdom, a little light...lots of hugs...

check your e-mail for a special message.

Welcome to Passions!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

3 posted 2001-05-17 09:40 PM

Well, this is a real heart wrencher and thinker (like someone else already said)

Screaming inside but our voices cant be heard?

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2001-05-18 12:05 PM

Welcome to Passions.
This piece of writing sent a chill through my spine as I felt your hurting and could relate so much to how you were feeling as I have suffered depression and it brought back many memories to me of when I tried to hide my feelings from people. I have found my writing to be the best therapy and I hope you do too. Thank you......Sue

Suetang

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

5 posted 2001-05-18 12:15 PM

To everyone who actually left a message!
Thanks so much!!!

i feel very welcomed by you all
and it is greatly appriciated.
i finally found a place where my talents are appricitated

joycerogers
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 83
Texas

6 posted 2001-05-18 03:25 AM

I appreciate your gift too. Your rhyme maintains a good grip on the emotion of your work.

May His glory be fresh within me. May my heart be renewed in His hand.

Joyce Rogers

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-05-18 12:04 PM

Welcome to Poetry Land Angel,its nice to have you here,
your writing speaks volumes and will express and bring to light the parts of you that other cant see...
hopefully you will heal in that light, thru your words.
take care
jm

tis never easy being a moth,
tis not easy being the flame.
what some never see is--
sometimes ... most times ...
they are one in the same.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-05-18 12:37 PM

Welcome, and I think we, here, do have a glimpse of you ...

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Tough_Cookie
Junior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 13
USA

9 posted 2001-05-18 12:38 PM

Hello HeAvEnS AnGeL,
I for one can see you pain, and see the torment that you are going through
*Reacing out and offering you a set of arms*
I really hope that things will very soon get better for you.
I have not been here long, and I'm finding that there are many nice and friendly people here. I hope you can do the same.

And as sad as it is, I really like your poem.

TC

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

10 posted 2001-05-18 01:24 PM

ohh...i see your first post was here angel...you've written this so well...so real...i loved every verse...thanks for sharing it...as i hope to see more...

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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