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Open Poetry #13

The Difference?

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-17 05:17 PM

The Difference?

in nothing
I ask too much of you
too much to give
I think it true
a touch of lips
true deceit
a liars game
not to repeat
lonely candle
all aglow
cold winds rush
out it goes
in this game
I feel no blame
silence screams
YOU
carry the shame
harbor no anger
it is indifference
do you know
the difference?

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 05-17-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-17 05:44 PM

well, one game I won't play is a "liar's game" Helen, this is moving.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-05-17 05:56 PM

I'd rather someone get mad, at least I'd know they cared.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2001-05-17 06:14 PM

Neat way of putting it my friend.

jwesley

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-05-17 10:31 PM

The difference, as the distance...between anger and indifference, is appreciated. Very nicely done!

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

5 posted 2001-05-17 10:39 PM

I don't like the game. I do like your poem

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-06-01 12:42 PM

wow

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