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The Difference?
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The Difference? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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The Difference? in nothing I ask too much of you too much to give I think it true a touch of lips true deceit a liars game not to repeat lonely candle all aglow cold winds rush out it goes in this game I feel no blame silence screams YOU carry the shame harbor no anger it is indifference do you know the difference? [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, one game I won't play is a "liar's game" Helen, this is moving. Kathleen Blake |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I'd rather someone get mad, at least I'd know they cared. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Neat way of putting it my friend. jwesley |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The difference, as the distance...between anger and indifference, is appreciated. Very nicely done! |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I don't like the game. I do like your poem |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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