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Still The Echoes
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Still The Echoes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Still The Echoes ~*Marge Tindal*~ still the echoes in the head dead long dead long long dead resonate no more no more no more I implore no no no no more sashed slashed abandoned dead long long dead dead long dead echo echo echo intheheadheadhead long dead wrong dead still it echoes in the head da-da da-da da-da da-da dead-dead-dead echo echo echo intheheadheadhead ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
whoosh....from light...to dark... the echoes are echoing, softer, softer, almost.... gone but still the echo, echoes on........ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Okay no more caffeine for you! you you you!  ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Hushhhhhhhhhh!!!! Regards to you Marge, Sudhir |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, I hear them crashing around in my head, as well. Interesting form. Well done. Sandra |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: I hear those echoes too! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
exceptionally innovative form. I hear the echos also. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
wow- you created a big impression with just a few words EXCEPTIONAL! Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I lovelovelove this oneoneneneeee Titia |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
A stir of Echoes, nicely done MArge~... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This reminds me so much of dreams that have no hope and yet will not die... they just keep haunting and whispering and leaving aches of might-have-beens. I'm so accustomed to a different type of poetry from you, I didn't expect to open this one and find my own confusion. *S* But it's a fine reminder that you can write anything well. *S* |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very creative, Marge, I like! Corinne |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I'm hearing the echoes today Marge, sometimes I wish I could silence the echoes.......this is wonderful. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, I like this one very much. I think it's these echoes that makes you the talented writer that you are. Please don't tell them to hush. Michael Proust- |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge, with the echos we get to hear your words over and over and over. Nicely done. Hugs, ME |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*I appreciate each of you for your comments on this one. Sometimes, a painful memory comes back with a Gatling gun staccato that echoes loudly. This one did ... and found it's way to the page after almost 26 years. I guess all memories create their own form. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! |
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