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Open Poetry #13
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
0 posted 2001-05-17 04:16 PM


the riddle circles
tighter and tighter it shrinks
until the ring fits

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.
© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-05-17 04:17 PM

I know this feeling, which is why I often feel like a square......

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee
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with you
2 posted 2001-05-17 07:56 PM

patiently I sit
waiting until the ring fits
hoping it's from you



~SEA
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2001-05-17 07:56 PM



the riddle circles
tighter and tighter it shrinks
until the ring fits


puzzled from within
pieced by piece, 'til completed
mystery rings true.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



HeAvEnS AnGeL
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The Hot Girl From Canada
4 posted 2001-05-17 08:25 PM

hopefully one day
the ring will fit  
i loved it!
HeAvEnS AnGeL
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The Hot Girl From Canada
5 posted 2001-05-17 08:25 PM

hopefully one day
the ring will fit  
i loved it!
jwesley
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Spring, Texas
6 posted 2001-05-17 08:47 PM

Neat poem...concept...

jwesley
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2001-05-17 09:29 PM

to borrow riddles
is a clue for you to find
circles of one's mind


Bravo!
Cuddlez
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8 posted 2001-05-17 09:29 PM

The ring will only fit
Those who are true
And deserve it!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
Paula Finn
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missouri
9 posted 2001-05-18 12:10 PM

Tighter and tighter
Is this love or just a game
Force cant make it fit
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2001-05-18 12:28 PM

Wow, this is fun.  Thank you all for your comments and wonderful senryus!

Colleen ~ The only thing square about you is your honesty  

SEA ~ What a beautiful response.  Post it and share it with all.

Nakdthoughts ~ Wynter, what a 1derful compliment.

HA ~ Thanks for the read. Glad you enjoyed.

JW ~ Thank you my friend.

Sunshine ~ WoW!  Please post this and share it with all ... then I can respond more appropriately  

Cuddlez ~ How right you are.  Thanx for the read  

PF ~ Well done! Do share this with all.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.
BrightStar
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11 posted 2001-05-18 12:29 PM

Welcome back.
passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2004-06-01 12:39 PM

good one
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