Open Poetry #13 |
Take Some Time |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Take Some Time Let’s take some time, it’s the thing we always lose, we should create a sabbatical for two. So, stop what you’re doing, pick up the phone, cancel the dentist, postpone the haircuts, send our regrets to that R.S.V.P; our friends will understand. Gas up the car, throw in some clothes, don’t make up consequences, the kids are at grandma’s, they’ll survive, I want to see the coast with you. Don’t make reservations, let’s just go where the road goes, find spontaneity, lock up the cell phone, put in some tapes, don’t want to hear the news today. Breathe in the Redwoods, Look! There’s Mendocino, let’s stop and soak up the atmosphere, don’t know about you but I’m thinking we should park it here. Up and down the coast we go, free from restrictions, we can suddenly recall, hey, what do you know? We’re still in love after all! © 2001 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This sounds absolutely wonderful, Corinne, spur of the moment and all that! Kathleen Blake |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Corinne....Buoyant. Passions requests postcards from the two of you. Bob PS Or at least a note in a bottle. [This message has been edited by RMW (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Kathleen and Bob! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Love=Time. Great poem Corinne! |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
I loved this one.Spending quality time with the one you love. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely idea and poem Corinne.... jwesley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
nothing like taking that time together. . . seems harder to find. . . good job with this one Corinne. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Sure hope this happened! Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I often wonder if this is all it would take. I love this. Its inspirational for my mood. Hope you're doin' well, Cor. |
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