Open Poetry #13 |
The Cloth That Separates |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
The Cloth That Separates 'Tis wanton foolish thoughts circling round and round inside my head, thoughts of love, cherished dreams of such desire but you're with him instead. I thought if I could touch your hand, run my fingers through your hair, then all the sadness of unrequited love, would fly away, just fly away, to some other far and distant day. Reaching out to help you from the car, I clasped your hand tighter than I should, praying magic would fire our love when flesh met flesh, you felt my heart, and naught existed but passions war; but lo! you wore black gloves, and spectras dark and hideous soul forbid the spark of flesh to flesh, leaving wanton foolish thoughts going round and round inside my head. w. james beard, jr. © March 2001 [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this *s... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JWesley~ this is fantastic!! Saving this SEA |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Hello! that was a beautiful poem im positive i was crying on the outside and on the inside it touched my heart |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Hello! that was a beautiful poem im positive i was crying on the outside and on the inside it touched my heart |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Beautiful |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Beautiful |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"...wanton, foolish thoughts..." I think you could carve yet another poem off of this line itself... a heartbreaker, indeed.... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks much folks, really glad you enjoyed the read.... jwesley |
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