Open Poetry #13 |
When I have you |
Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
When I have you When the skies are black From an impending storm I just set back Letting the thoughts of you take form When life puts a mountain in front of me I don’t turn my back and take the easy way out I let my spirit fly high and free By letting my love for you in my heart out When I come to a valley so low As deep as it is long Our love starts to flow Like a river carrying me along When the sun sets in the west With visions of fireflies dancing in my head I know why I love the nights the best For that is the time that together we go to bed It is then that the Goddess Venus She covers me with a love dust Making come to me visions of us What I have for you is real love not lust I love you As the sun loves a rose I love you From the tip of you nose to your cute little toes I need you As the rose does the rain I need you Without you I have nothing to gain I want you As a child wants love I want you To know my love I will give you All I have to give right from the start I will give you My heart When I am with you I have nothing more to gain When I am with you I have the whole world Icyheart May 16, 2001 |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
A most gentle render of what then shows, your heart, so tender Beautiful! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
such love rendered from each line...wow Kathleen Blake |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Im glad you posted this...I just hope she listens...hugs sweetie |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very soft and romantic. corinne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice Alan...James |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Alan, So touching and endearing. Thank you for sharing TaraB |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
This is so romatically beauitfully.So much love and tenderness shining through. |
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