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Alan
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since 2000-09-12
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0 posted 2001-05-17 12:15 PM



When I have you

When the skies are black
From an impending storm
I just set back
Letting the thoughts of you take form
When life puts a mountain in front of me
I don’t turn my back and take the easy way out
I let my spirit fly high and free
By letting my love for you in my heart out
When I come to a valley so low
As deep as it is long
Our love starts to flow
Like a river carrying me along
When the sun sets in the west
With visions of fireflies dancing in my head
I know why I love the nights the best
For that is the time that together we go to bed
It is then that the Goddess Venus
She covers me with a love dust
Making come to me visions of us
What I have for you is real love not lust
I love you
As the sun loves a rose
I love you
From the tip of you nose to your cute little toes
I need you
As the rose does the rain
I need you
Without you I have nothing to gain
I want you
As a child wants love
I want you
To know my love
I will give you
All I have to give right from the start
I will give you
My heart
When I am with you
I have nothing more to gain
When I am with you
I have the whole world

Icyheart
May 16, 2001


© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-17 12:19 PM


A most gentle render
of what then shows,
your heart,
so tender


Beautiful!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-05-17 12:23 PM


such love rendered from each line...wow

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Paula Finn
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missouri
3 posted 2001-05-17 02:24 PM


Im glad you posted this...I just hope she listens...hugs sweetie
Corinne
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state of confusion
4 posted 2001-05-17 02:43 PM


Very soft and romantic.

corinne

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-05-17 05:10 PM


Nice Alan...James
rosepetals25
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6 posted 2001-05-17 08:57 PM


Alan,

    So touching and endearing. Thank you for sharing


TaraB

Cheryl Flemming
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since 2000-09-14
Posts 102

7 posted 2001-05-17 10:00 PM


This is so romatically beauitfully.So much love and tenderness shining through.
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