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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-05-17 08:37 AM


Paradise
By: Noah Eaton
2/21/01

To fall
Deep into the jungle of your heart on ages safari
Crashing through the mirrors of doubt
Landing softly in a place without any obstructing mirrors or walls
Falling into your arms, summoned by your lovely song
Falling for you…would be paradise

To feel
Your warm sighs and breaths pierce me like darts
Filling my heart with caresses as loves juices flow
As you hold me in your arms, feeling the softness of your lips
Cocooned with you in amore, touching each other with words as soft fingers massage each other
Feeling you…would be paradise

To look
Into your beautiful eyes, leaving me breathless for words
At your goddess face, looking into my eyes at that same moment
And watching that smile shine like the crescent moon hanging on a monkey bar
Watching your hair sway in the wind, as you gently raise your hand and stroke it
Seeing you…would be paradise

To smell
Your lovely scents and perfumes, swimming through my head
Breathed through my nose, seeping into my heart
Tickling it with your beauty as a needle of affection punctures it
Melting my heart in the heat of your irresistible charm
All of this…would be paradise

To taste
The delicious sweetness of your lips
Touching mine again and again, waves of love crashing against my spirits shore
Kissing you softly, over and over, tasting the rare sugar only love can produce
To kiss you and taste your love, much more beautiful than dessert
Would be paradise

To hear
The rapture of your sweet sincere voice echoing to me
Lyrics of the heart being orchestrated from your lips to my heart
Throbbing it in passion, as I softly stroke your soft angel hair
Playing loves notes in the enchanted lyre of your hair
And conducting loves songs with you…would be paradise

To love you
For all eternity
Kissing each others tears of the past away, seeking total happiness
Holding you close, never letting go, watching the stars, the moon, the sun rise and set
Fulfilling our dreams, fulfilling our lives
Making love to you…would be paradise


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-05-17 09:30 AM


I have felt some of these same desires myself for a certain woman...you have written of your desires so well...James
angelswing
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2 posted 2001-05-17 11:12 AM


Wow, this person must have something prety big going for them . To inspire you to write all that down in such a beutiful way, I enjoyed reading it .
Thanks a lot .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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