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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-05-17 07:54 AM



Shaking Sugar

~*Marge Tindal*~

Look at her in traipse of town,
shaking sugar all around !
Granulating steps in smile,
the laughter of this winsome child.

Little sweetie on parade,
nothing artificial in her charade.
Charming all with her beguile,
dance little sugar, spread your smile.




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
kitkat
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1 posted 2001-05-17 08:53 AM


Oh So sweet:-)
Decaflame
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2 posted 2001-05-17 08:54 AM


Precious!
Alan
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3 posted 2001-05-17 08:55 AM


I love this...there is nothing more heartlifting than a happy smiling child
Cerenity
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4 posted 2001-05-17 09:30 AM


Hi Marge,

This is so cute,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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5 posted 2001-05-17 10:54 AM


Marge, You just keep coming up with these fantastic poems, I can just see the little sweety now ... Now where did I put that Jelly baby .
Thanks .
L.of.L. Tommy .
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Charisma
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6 posted 2001-05-17 11:00 AM


shaking sugar indeed Marge....what a sweet and cute gem.
love it.

Charisma

Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2001-05-17 11:12 AM


real sugar, this one!!

Enjoyed muchly...

regards Marge,
Sudhir

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8 posted 2001-05-17 12:03 PM


Now you KNOW I love this, as I have a little sugar shaker of my own.  She sweetens me up all the time.  This was adorable Marge.

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9 posted 2001-05-17 01:10 PM


  HOW SWEET IT IS!!!!!!!!!!!1

THIS SURELY TICKLES MY FANCY...

  WAY TO GO   MARGE
      AROHA

Paula Finn
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10 posted 2001-05-17 02:21 PM


Such a sweet treat...little 'uns are such a joy...
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11 posted 2001-05-17 07:33 PM


KitKat~
Thanks so much.

DecaFlame~
Glad you enjoyed it.

Alan~
And aren't they such little 'flirts' !

Cerenity~
Thanks, sweetie.

AngelsWing~
Thanks so much for your sweet reply.

Charisma~
I just love that you love it !

Sudhir~
A little morning sweetness !

Mysteria~
I KNEW that you'd like it !
Just sprinkling sugar on my cinnamon toast this morning
when it came to me ...
Just had a mind of it's own !

SoaringEagle~
You know I like to 'tickle' your fancy !
Love you, sugar !

Paula~
Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it.
Yeppers ... they're sweetie pies alright !
~*Marge*!

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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