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Open Poetry #13

I look at you.....Poem II

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2001-05-16 05:36 PM

For the story behind it, see 'I feel so lost...Poem I'

I look at you
but you've disappeared
turned in upon yourself
within your thoughts

I look at you
I can still see you
but you're not there
so I will wait

I look at you
and recognize again
the man I love

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 05-16-2001).]

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-16 05:43 PM

Again, your strength pulled you through...you are apparently quite an awesome woman...

and a poet I shall be glad to come to know....

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2001-05-17 12:30 PM

Titia
This was so very beautiful but so tragic at the same time. How lucky is your husband to have someone who loves him so very much.
Take care......Sue.

Suetang

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

3 posted 2001-05-29 08:04 PM

I bet he knows how fortunate he is to have your love.

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