Open Poetry #13 |
Just a few words |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Can I speak to you a moment 'cause I feel a bit alone when there's nobody around me even no one on the phone Can I speak to you a moment 'cause I want to very much Or do you think that it is crazy to put this question as such Can I speak to you a moment or would you rather I did not But in times I feel such need for not have the loneliness I've got Can I speak to you a moment this is what I need to say Even when not always friendly I do love people anyway |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you know I love people also, even the ones who don't love me back!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dear Kathleen, I hope the !!! were not ment for me personally. I wrote this poem several years ago (in Dutch) when a friend pulled a nasty trick on me. But I honestly must admit, it sounds better in the Dutch language. Love ya Titia |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I know those kind of feelings, guess we all have them at times.. I don't think it lost anything in the translation. I really like your writing and I'm having a good time reading all of them. |
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