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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

0 posted 2001-05-16 11:58 AM

the form of femininity

I need no head
you care not what I think.
I need no hands or arms
with which
I might reach for an
open door.
I need no feet
that I would
walk away from you.
I am the perfect form
of femininity
I meet your every need.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2001-05-16 12:03 PM

OUCH !!! great write as always....helen

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-05-16 12:07 PM

This is an awesome write, and I would like to have the statuette on my mantle, please....

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

3 posted 2001-05-16 12:13 PM

This is too excellent for words.....perfection!

Mike

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

4 posted 2001-05-16 01:29 PM

thanks so much.....it always amazes me, the ones I am unsure of are liked the most...I really found this one lacking, I knew I had a poem in my head to go with the pic, but I wasn't sure this was the right one...thanks again

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-05-16 04:13 PM

my goodness, you mean I don't need all these extra limbs!!!!!

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2001-05-16 04:35 PM

Hey... at least you have something to offer. *G* That's more than I can say...

This poem would be powerful by itself... but the picture adds a searing visual. How cold life is when so much is possible and so little is needed. *S* Well done!

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 05-17-2001).]

Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

7 posted 2001-05-16 05:00 PM

Hehe!
Great ...
I have no legs that I would walk away from you...
Love that line, something my exs would agree on:-)!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-05-16 06:53 PM

the form of femininity is not on the outside. . . I feel that's what you tried to show here. . .

I liked it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

9 posted 2001-05-17 09:31 AM

Irish rose

well they do come in handy sometimes

thank you

suthern...lady...I just got one thing to say to your comment....if *you* got nothing to offer, then I must be in the minus figures, cause I have never seen a heart more loyal or with more love

thank you lady

cuddlez...thank you

sven...yeppers...you got it right, thank you

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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10 posted 2004-06-01 12:45 PM

sigh

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