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| Open Poetry #13 |
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Never For A Moment |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Never for a moment did I dream Someone like you could love me Eyes wide open, your heart too You saw all I was... ...and all I could be With your love as my light You looked beyond what your eyes could see To what your heart could feel You found the woman in me The one with so much love to give You let me know with every word Im all you want...all you need In your eyes I am Woman, lover, friend Soulmates Yes soulmates Beyond tomorrow Forever and one more day Never for a moment did I dream There was you |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Don't you love it...when even an undream comes true? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Very nice Paula. There was a great conveyance of emotions in here. Actually, to me it read more like a speech. By using a pause, you really amplified the dramatic influence of the piece. Lovely work.  ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ What an affirmation of love~ 'In your eyes I am Woman, lover, friend Soulmates Yes soulmates Beyond tomorrow Forever and one more day Never for a moment did I dream There was you' I REALLY believe in the here and now ... and LOVE the thought of 'beyond tomorrow'. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Paula...this is good. Everyone should know love like this. You deserve it |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Never for a moment did I dream there was you." A nice surprise for you...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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