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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2001-05-17 12:47 PM


Never for a moment did I dream
Someone like you could love me
Eyes wide open, your heart too
You saw all I was...
...and all I could be
With your love as my light
You looked beyond what your eyes could see
To what your heart could feel
You found the woman in me
The one with so much love to give
You let me know with every word
Im all you want...all you need
In your eyes I am
Woman, lover, friend
Soulmates
Yes soulmates
Beyond tomorrow
Forever and one more day
Never for a moment did I dream
There was you


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JLR
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1 posted 2001-05-17 12:57 PM


Don't you love it...when even an undream comes true?
anonymousfemale
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2 posted 2001-05-17 06:24 AM


Very nice Paula. There was a great conveyance of emotions in here. Actually, to me it read more like a speech. By using a pause, you really amplified the dramatic influence of the piece.

Lovely work.  

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-05-17 07:33 AM


Paula~
What an affirmation of love~

'In your eyes I am
Woman, lover, friend
Soulmates
Yes soulmates
Beyond tomorrow
Forever and one more day
Never for a moment did I dream
There was you'


I REALLY believe in the here and now ...
and LOVE the thought of 'beyond tomorrow'.

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Alan
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4 posted 2001-05-17 09:03 AM


Paula...this is good. Everyone should know love like this. You deserve it
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-05-17 09:27 AM


"Never for a moment did I dream
there was you."
A nice surprise for you...James

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-06-01 12:46 PM


beautiful
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