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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2001-05-16 12:11 PM

~* Just Listen ~

I am always here for you but,
I want to ask you to do this one thing …
Listen to the sounds of the wind whistling
Softly through the passion tree.
Find peace for yourself,
And hear the song nature sings.
Just listen.

My love is eternally here for you.
I will always support you through tough times,
And hold your hand through the good.
Friends are hard to find,
Rest knowing this,
I treasure you.
Just listen.

Real friends fly like doves of truth,
Fluttering love to lift you when you're down.
If you listen you will hear my wings.
So for now, just breathe,
Take time to refresh your soul,
Saturate yourself in the sounds of nature.
Just listen.

When you are feeling at your lowest,
Walk with Nature, hold her hand tight.
Let her flow through your being.
Surround yourself in creation.
For the natural sounds and feelings,
You receive will give answers, and heal you.
Just listen.

I cannot always be there in person,
But know this, just as nature envelopes you,
I am there listening, caring and loving you.
So when you need me most of all,
Imagine the dove of truth holding you in her wings.
Walk with nature, and think of me.
Just listen, I will be there.

My friend, trust your heart, but heed your mind.
Shield your soul from pain.
Let the doves of truth flutter about you,
Do not close your ears or eyes to their message,
Open your spirit to nature’s message,
For the answer was always inside of you.
Just listen!

*
art: www.jimwarren.com "fly away"
music: "spirit"

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

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inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-05-16 12:27 PM

"My friend, trust your heart, but heed your mind.
Shield your soul from pain.
Let the doves of truth flutter about you,
Do not close your ears or eyes to their message,
Open your spirit to nature’s message,
For the answer was always inside of you.
Just listen!"

Your whole poem was beautiful, but these lines I've copied mean so much.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-05-16 01:10 AM

Mysteria, this is absolutely beautiful. The stanza here, though, touched my heart more greatly than all the others. I too, almost picked the last stanza. Positively wonderful poem!

When you are feeling at your lowest,
Walk with Nature, hold her hand tight.
Let her flow through your being.
Surround yourself in creation.
For the natural sounds and feelings,
You receive will give answers, and heal you.
Just listen.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-05-16 03:46 AM

I think this is an excellent poem and contains a lot of wisdom.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2001-05-16 06:01 AM

Real friends fly like doves of truth

... so well said... great writing...

regards,
Sudhir

Martha Cowan
Member

since 2001-03-08

Posts 240
Groves, Texas

5 posted 2001-05-16 07:23 AM

As always, you are there....and I do hear the flutter of the wings...thank you for all that you do, and for loving me unconditionally. ((((((HUGS))))))))
This was so beautiful and soothing to the soul, thank you.
dawn

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-05-16 07:28 AM

Mysteria~
I breathe these truths ~
Very lovingly penned.
The heart is an awesome inkwell ... yes ?
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

7 posted 2001-05-16 10:08 AM

A truly wonderful read, Sharon. Your love runneth over for those you love in this poem. Beautiful piece of writing..

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2001-05-16 12:01 PM

Mysteria,

This is just lovely.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

9 posted 2001-05-16 12:46 PM

I will only say two words:

Beautifull, beautifull

Thank you

Titia

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2001-05-16 01:34 PM

inot2b: I am glad it touched you in some small way.

VAS: So very glad you like this one for inside are always the answers.

Julian: me wise? Comes from years of "not listening" to my inner voice.

Sudhir: Yes real friends never hesitate and fly like doves to help their friends seek the truth for themselves though.

Martha: Hear the gentle flutter for therin lies peace.

Marge: I "know" you do, and yes, the heart is also my inkwell. Thank you for a smile!

Kate: Thank you, it is nice to know that sometimes our love does not go without some small acknowledgement isn't it?

Auguste: Thank you so much.

Titia: And I two words for you...thank you.

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

11 posted 2001-05-16 04:01 PM

This is stunning as all of your graphics and poetry is!

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2001-05-16 04:22 PM

Irish Rose, thank you so much for your kind words.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2001-05-22 12:45 PM

Such wise words... written and presented so beautifully. The path to peace isn't something we can give someone no matter how much we long to be able to do so... but we can let them know we're with them every step of the way to encourage and love and listen... and soften the fall if they falter.

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

14 posted 2001-05-23 06:25 AM

Real friends fly like doves of truth, is very nice , so sweet

I love to nice poetry.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

15 posted 2001-05-23 07:38 AM

Suthern: You said it better than I ever could and thank you!

Waseem: Thank you for reading and enjoying this one.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

16 posted 2001-05-23 07:20 PM

So beautifully written, good friends are hard to find.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

17 posted 2001-05-23 10:17 PM

im 14 years old and that poem realy moved me i wish i could write like that good write

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

18 posted 2001-05-24 02:47 AM

Latin passions: Thank you for reading this and your sweet comment.

Corey14: Well I said the same thing when I was 14, and by that point had been dabbling in poetry for 8 years off and on, and have been ever since. So...when you are my age, 55, there will be someone your age saying the exact same thing, and I take it as a wonderful compliment, thank you.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

19 posted 2001-05-28 08:29 PM

i love it so much! very very amazing an oh so wonderful,spiritual as well

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