Open Poetry #13 |
bloom of love |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*Gallery Reading Room* seed of love taken from my heart I have kept you close for many years waiting to be able to plant you into the ground of another I have searched high and low and have planted you in ground that seemed to be fertile but that was instead, fallow and dry my love did not grow in that ground and so I plucked you out of there and kept you in the packet of my dreams waiting to be shared and now, seed of love I may have finally found the ground that I need to plant you in, the ground of acceptance in the garden of life where you will be gently cultivated tenderly fed and one day harvested for the flowering of your seed. . . the bloom of love ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Sven, wow with all this love going around, someone is going to be in there deep! Hope it is the right kind of ground this time. Hugs, ME |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! Just keep the compost handy Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
How necessary for it to be the right one or our efforts come to naught...James |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Bloomin' beautiful! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful my friend, hope it blossoms just as grand for you. jwesley |
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Tough_Cookie Junior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 13USA |
Oh boy, this place makes my head spin. There are so many good poets here. I like your poem sven. It's very touching. I hope your seed flourishes. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sven....APPLAUSE! ... and what Interloper said. Bob |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
bravo!!! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is really nice. The bloom of love, I like that. Jyce |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Fertile ground is all it takes....well done! |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
This is wonderful! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all for your wonderful words. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed this one. . . plant the seeds my friends. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Sven I thought this was so beautifully written and I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks......Sue Suetang |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ This is very refreshing, with your touch of class and grace....beautiful... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
*applause*..wow this had so much beauty yet so wonderfully written...i enjoyed this greatly sven...as always... if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-18-2001).] |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hiya Beautiful Heart.. Your writing is tender as always. Once planted in fertile soil and tended to by your spirit..I am sure that the bloom will be sweet and will endure all kinds of weather. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sven, this is sooo beautiful... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all for your wonderful words. . . I am glad that you enjoyed this. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Sven,my poet friend,you've done it again |
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