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| Open Poetry #13 |
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Poetic Poets Perfect Pedantry |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Caliginous cacophony filled with slag DarkSong bellows a tune to DarkRag Mysterious melancholy chills made of DarkRainbow shadows over DarkDove Profound pedantry from each mouth DarkTraveler journeys to DarkSouth Depravity deepens and splits the whole DarkSilver drained from each DarkSoul Gloom gathering silent monotony DarkSea slicing into DarkNanny Doleful drums midnight stabbin’ DarkCrag falls prey to DarkTabin Penumbral pulses have no choice DarkAngel can silence DarkVoice Wild wounds stirred into salt DarkCat slashes into DarkWalt Secret seminaries in darkened cowl DarkFemme quiets the hoot of DarkOwl Hell’s halls are the Devil’s mine Hidden from sight is DarkdeVine |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Fantastic write! Love this one |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
slightly different....a re-read is a must... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Darkly intriquing! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much! Is this a certain type of writing? Are there rules for it? Wow, this is very cool  I'm saving this SEA |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all..this is a repost from the early days of the forum. We had a lot of 'dark' poetry then so I took liberties with the names of the regulars..if you read closely you'll see some of our friends in here.... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hee hee this tickled me fully. Dark Nanny hahah hahahah yuh. How coulda I missed this b4 yuh |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
PdeV, Wow! Thoroughly enjoyed this. Very well done. Don't know the people but got that it was a piece written about other poets and their style of writing or the subject they tackled most. Very good job. Panne |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very, very creative and well done! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well at least I know why the Dark Nanny ended up getting sliced. Love alliteration: The perfectly purloined pelican purchased passage on a parachuteless plane. Perhaps you're puzzled. |
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Anson Beau Cavell Junior Member
since 2001-05-12
Posts 49Ohio,US |
Very clever, well done. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all!! I couldn't have done this one without my friends, Thesaurus and Dictionary!  |
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