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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-05-16 07:51 AM


This is a poem that I wrote for a friend.  He roleplays and came up with a story and asked me to write something for him.. just thought I'd explain since this is a little different from my normal stuff    




The Greys

Their darkness blankets the earth
Shifting and melding in size.. shape
Holding secrets that live inside their
Everlasting land of eternal night.
For something exists within the shadows.
A life force built through generations.
An essence so great and powerful
Only the light can stop them.
Proud and dignified, their head held high
The stealth Greys glide through the land of night
Withstanding the hands of time.
Their souls wiser and older than time itself
Carrying a knowledge of death and survival
That only the most expierenced of warriors
Can carry in their hearts.
Waiting for the one glorious day
When shadows will take over the light
When they can roam free among others
When they control their own destiny.
Until then they wait… watching.
Developing and revolving their powers
Taking what they need to exist.
Grey colorless eyes intently alert.
Waiting for their night to reign supreme.


TaraB

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 05-16-2001).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-05-16 09:55 AM


VERY Imaginative! I like this style on you! Would love to see a part two--HINT-HINT-HINT.

Nice job, enjoyed muchly.

kitkat
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2 posted 2001-05-16 11:12 AM


Oh I really liked this..Lets your mind imagine what will happen next. It can make on fear the night...

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Nate Dogg
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3 posted 2001-05-16 02:56 PM


Good write...I liked this!

Nathan

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4 posted 2001-05-17 01:15 AM


hehehe
turn this one into an ongoing story, dear   i like
-napalm

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rosepetals25
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5 posted 2001-05-17 07:29 AM


serenity - Hint hint huh? lol. I will see what I can do.. but no promises! I'm glad you liked it.. I wasn't sure if people would Thank you for stopping in.

KitKat - I know! My friend is an amazing story writer... so I have to hand the praise to him.. he inspired me . Thanks for reading!

Nate Dog - I'm glad you liked it And I'm glad you stopped in Thank you!

Napalm - As I said to serenity, I will see! If I do you will be the first to know  


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