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The Greys
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The Greys |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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This is a poem that I wrote for a friend. He roleplays and came up with a story and asked me to write something for him.. just thought I'd explain since this is a little different from my normal stuff  The Greys Their darkness blankets the earth Shifting and melding in size.. shape Holding secrets that live inside their Everlasting land of eternal night. For something exists within the shadows. A life force built through generations. An essence so great and powerful Only the light can stop them. Proud and dignified, their head held high The stealth Greys glide through the land of night Withstanding the hands of time. Their souls wiser and older than time itself Carrying a knowledge of death and survival That only the most expierenced of warriors Can carry in their hearts. Waiting for the one glorious day When shadows will take over the light When they can roam free among others When they control their own destiny. Until then they wait… watching. Developing and revolving their powers Taking what they need to exist. Grey colorless eyes intently alert. Waiting for their night to reign supreme. TaraB [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 05-16-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
VERY Imaginative! I like this style on you! Would love to see a part two--HINT-HINT-HINT. Nice job, enjoyed muchly. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh I really liked this..Lets your mind imagine what will happen next. It can make on fear the night... -------------- |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Good write...I liked this! Nathan |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
hehehe turn this one into an ongoing story, dear  i like-napalm ************************************* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
serenity - Hint hint huh? lol. I will see what I can do.. but no promises! I'm glad you liked it.. I wasn't sure if people would Thank you for stopping in.KitKat - I know! My friend is an amazing story writer... so I have to hand the praise to him.. he inspired me . Thanks for reading!Nate Dog - I'm glad you liked it  And I'm glad you stopped in Thank you!Napalm - As I said to serenity, I will see! If I do you will be the first to know  |
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