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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2001-05-15 07:41 PM


Note: Found in each stanza of my poem are
the four seasons.  See if you can find them...  

4-Seasons


Hello, summer sun,
Vanish winter's sting,
Fall on those in love
Watching flowers spring.

Faith whisp'ring gently
Alas summer's breeze  
Lo, below interwoven
Love mixes 'neath the trees.

Fallow grounded dreams
Springing into view,
Interested lover's
Theorem must renew.



-Lighthouse Bob

[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 05-15-2001).]
© Copyright 2001 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-05-15 08:58 PM

this is awesome yuh gave me alil bit o headache but i found em all and great poem to boot
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-05-15 09:09 PM

yes very nice Bob...enjoyable to read

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2001-05-15 09:24 PM

Walt,

Wow, I am impressed.... you found 'em quick!
Great Job!!!  Sorry for the the headache though.

Wynter,

Thanks for reading and your nice comment is appreciated as well.  No headaches I hope.
latin passion
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4 posted 2001-05-15 09:43 PM

An interesting logic one must deduce in general theory. The idea accepted or proposed demonstrates lots of truth. Love finding the 4 seasons.

From the heart - sincerity. Where you go I follow.
thepoeticplumber
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5 posted 2001-05-15 09:52 PM

A very interesting and enjoyabele read.  A nice way with words.  Roger
Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-05-15 09:55 PM

This is great! I could use it tomorrow for the kids I will be speaking to about poetry.  May I borrow?  Leave your answer here, I'll check in the a.m.
Lighthousebob
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7 posted 2001-05-15 10:02 PM

latin passion,

I suppose I can reason
that all love has her season,
but what goes on under trees
is best left for birds and bees.

Ha....... Loved your quick theology!!!
and glad you loved finding the seasons.  
Lighthousebob
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8 posted 2001-05-15 10:24 PM

Roger,

W E L C O M E to "Passions in Poetry..." Glad as "The Poetic Plumber" you were able to pull something out of my poem.... As for me, I am drained.  A little plumber humor....  Thanks so much for your nice reply.  
Lighthousebob
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9 posted 2001-05-15 10:47 PM

Sunshine,

Moi????  From a kids kinda guy....  You betch-ya!!!  I think they'll have some fun with it.  Thanks for the consideration.....
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